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Array ( [sid] => 128946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => November the 31st [time] => 2006-12-02 07:23:35 [hometext] => I made a mistake on Dec the 1st - which put the metaphor in mind... I let this sit in my head for the day before I sat down and put it together [bodytext] => Staring out the window
of yet another bus
watching a world go by
a mind, lost, in another time
of when the weather is good
the beach and friends
music, drinks and smiles to go round
a time of her promise of love
- forever
that day
- November the 31st
a day never to come
like the world passing by
of yet another bus
with as much meaning
- as Latin
with as much substance
- as a daydream
to me – just a boy
a strange kid
forgotten like the transit moment
loved like a forgotten parent
with everything to hope for
a love to rely on
with her endless hold
and the start of life
everything starts then
- November the 31st
and not on another bus.

2/12/06 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

November the 31st

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 07:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Staring out the window
of yet another bus
watching a world go by
a mind, lost, in another time
of when the weather is good
the beach and friends
music, drinks and smiles to go round
a time of her promise of love
- forever
that day
- November the 31st
a day never to come
like the world passing by
of yet another bus
with as much meaning
- as Latin
with as much substance
- as a daydream
to me – just a boy
a strange kid
forgotten like the transit moment
loved like a forgotten parent
with everything to hope for
a love to rely on
with her endless hold
and the start of life
everything starts then
- November the 31st
and not on another bus.

2/12/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-12-02 07:23:35]
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Re: November the 31st (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:54:46 PM AEST
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Good piece of writing, once again. You made me feel as if I was sitting on that bus, with such a lost feeling. Your writes speak volumes.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: November the 31st (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 05:20:41 PM AEST
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Truly magnificent! Very deep and powerful, lonely and heartbreaking, this write is moving to the point of tears, as though it is the very thoughts of your heart! Wonderful write-sad feelings

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