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& not regain your side

You've no need to look back~

or falter in stride...

For wherever I am~

I'm always with you

Wherever you go~

I will follow there too...

Whenever you take a chance~

or make a choice

I'll be there helping you~

to hear your own voice...

Whenever to yourself~

you look for whats true

And trust it to exist~

there within you...

you...

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You

Contributed by MisfitMe on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 05:38:09 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Should ever I fall~

& not regain your side

You've no need to look back~

or falter in stride...

For wherever I am~

I'm always with you

Wherever you go~

I will follow there too...

Whenever you take a chance~

or make a choice

I'll be there helping you~

to hear your own voice...

Whenever to yourself~

you look for whats true

And trust it to exist~

there within you...

you...

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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by blindchoice on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:04:37 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this...nice write.

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 06:56:31 PM AEST
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Positive uplifting write.

Michelle

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:14:07 AM AEST
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This is a positive reinforcement write. Thank you for sharing.

sadaddy

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:32:56 AM AEST
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Kerry~
Such beautifully ascribed words that lift the spirits. You definately know how to give a person a good pick me up when they need it.

Whenever to yourself~

you look for whats true

And trust it to exist~

there within you...

you...

I like these lines alot. They speak volumes~
Well done dearest Kerry~ Write on MisFit I love your work~
love n hugs,
sue m

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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short, sweet and to the point loved it!!

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:54:59 PM AEST
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Good strong and uplifting write. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:13:58 PM AEST
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A wonderful mission statement for any mentorship, guidance counselor, or even parents on the throes of their children becoming adults...

Praise for the dedication to each other thank you for shining a light here.

Peace
AJPIII

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by The_View on Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 11:23:49 PM AEST
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Definitely worth the read.

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 10:20:16 PM AEST
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very pretty!
you are always there for the person this is about and they are always there for you
there's truth in this poem and its beautiful
:-)
ashley

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 07:27:41 PM AEST
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This poem has proved so very true so far and will remain so for as long as is right, in this case forever [hopefully].

;]

Gracious Seedling,

*YoUr DaUgHtEr*

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 04:52:43 PM AEST
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I hear alot in this and you my friend was and still are and will always be, a writter who reaches into my soul and leave's a most favorable impression . . .

((((MM))))

welcome back . . .

Ben

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