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Array ( [sid] => 128623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blackened [time] => 2006-11-24 10:27:14 [hometext] => 'Dark feelings needing release' [bodytext] => Waiting in this hell called life
Waiting to die
Fighting back the tears
Falling with an unspoken vengeance
Holding onto a dream
That's already died
Looking into a strangers eyes
Needing to say so much
But remain silent

The music plays
That's my escape
The night rolls in
That's my escape
The wall is high
That's my escape
The picture fades

Blackened by pain
Blackened by the truth
Blackened by reality
Blackened

Desperation
Constant Irritation
Sweet Temptation
No Sensation
Numb

What could be
Will never
What has been
Is dead
What is
Is blackened

By Jay Basey © 2005
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => devils_denial [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Blackened

Contributed by devils_denial on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 10:27:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Waiting in this hell called life
Waiting to die
Fighting back the tears
Falling with an unspoken vengeance
Holding onto a dream
That's already died
Looking into a strangers eyes
Needing to say so much
But remain silent

The music plays
That's my escape
The night rolls in
That's my escape
The wall is high
That's my escape
The picture fades

Blackened by pain
Blackened by the truth
Blackened by reality
Blackened

Desperation
Constant Irritation
Sweet Temptation
No Sensation
Numb

What could be
Will never
What has been
Is dead
What is
Is blackened

By Jay Basey © 2005

Copyright Â© devils_denial ... [ 2006-11-24 10:27:14]
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Re: Blackened (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 09:46:06 AM AEST
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different dark poetry..but i love it. i especially love this part...
"The music plays
That's my escape
The night rolls in
That's my escape"
...my escape...so sweet and beautiful. truly amazing...your a lovely writer!

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