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[title] => Shane (for soap fans of The B & B)
[time] => 2006-11-24 05:28:31
[hometext] => I submited 3 poems without realizing I wasn't suppose to be making every line rhyme like I been doing. I looked up poems from Eliz B Browning & every other line rhymes 4 the most part. In poetry the lines don't necessary have to rhyme. I feel so stupid
[bodytext] => "Shane" (for the soap opera fans of The Bold & the Beautiful) He's a troublesome boy And he tends to annoy Now there for some time He had all kinds of designs And his main attraction Twas Forrester Fashions And get his hands on their money so Shane can grab so fast his promised land of milk & honey And then the tide makes a turn Plenty life lessons Shane needs to learn Hence cupid has struck & Shane is in love & now he wants to be Phoebe's beau Yet his tale may be one of woe He hasn't the notion how to move slow And his bad behavior isn't getting him ahead But most probably land him in trouble instead If he hopes to win her love in this game so she'll be his soon & take his name He sure has change's need to be made. Shane's not so good at being understood This poor guy; I say with a sigh It's just to bad; his stories so sad He could have freely, willingly given his help and not just been thinking of himself If he hadn't got himself all up in a fetter Things would a turned out a whole lot better [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 31 [informant] => visionarybee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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