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Array ( [sid] => 128616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sadness [time] => 2006-11-23 23:31:02 [hometext] => I wrote this when my girlfriend, whom i loved dearly left me. [bodytext] => As the last of the dead leaves fall from the branches
And the air starts to get that little chill
I wonder how many more chances
I will get to feel
How nice the air is up here
I stand at the top of this mountain
Looking down, and wanting to share
This sight with you
But I know that you no longer care
I wish that I still had your love
But I know that you no longer care
You told me you loved me
Then you pushed me away
You told me you hate me
Then you wrap your arms around me
You stayed with me
And said you wanted to leave
You left me
And said that you wished you never had
I wish you would make up your mind
Love me, Hate me,
I wish I knew
Which one, I would rather have you do
I am starting to feel myself slip away
From all that is important to me
I feel as if I should leave this place
And I mean the world
I can feel the dark embrace of death
But I do not fear it
I long for it
And I hope that by reading this you have seen
That I never stopped loving you
Now I see you with him
And I wonder if this pain will ever go away
Was your love for me just a sham?
I think this hurt is here to stay
I hope you are happy with him
I hope he loves you as much as I do
I hope he never hurts you
The pain you have caused me
Will never go away
And I hope that you never know how it feels
To lose the person you hold closer
Than anyone in the world
I told you everything about me
I told you about all of my hopes and dreams
You told me that you loved the way I thought
If so, why did you leave me
What did I do wrong
You said you loved the way I felt about you
And that I had the courage to tell you
And then you come back and say
That I am to loving
You once told me that it wasn't a bad thing
Well, loving you to much, is what made you leave
When you left, it destroyed me
I broke down and cried
I hadn't cried in years
My heart is now empty
And I don't know that I will ever love again
Just know that i have never stopped loving you
And I never will
Though you have hurt me
And broke me
I have to live on
I hate living without you
I will never forget you
But you will forget me
It may not be soon
But I will gently fade from your memory
You will hear my voice, but not be able to place it
Just another voice from the past
That is what I will become to you
So I say my goodbye to you
And hope that you will always be happy
Goodbye

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Sadness

Contributed by RichardGillis on Thursday, 23rd November 2006 @ 11:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As the last of the dead leaves fall from the branches
And the air starts to get that little chill
I wonder how many more chances
I will get to feel
How nice the air is up here
I stand at the top of this mountain
Looking down, and wanting to share
This sight with you
But I know that you no longer care
I wish that I still had your love
But I know that you no longer care
You told me you loved me
Then you pushed me away
You told me you hate me
Then you wrap your arms around me
You stayed with me
And said you wanted to leave
You left me
And said that you wished you never had
I wish you would make up your mind
Love me, Hate me,
I wish I knew
Which one, I would rather have you do
I am starting to feel myself slip away
From all that is important to me
I feel as if I should leave this place
And I mean the world
I can feel the dark embrace of death
But I do not fear it
I long for it
And I hope that by reading this you have seen
That I never stopped loving you
Now I see you with him
And I wonder if this pain will ever go away
Was your love for me just a sham?
I think this hurt is here to stay
I hope you are happy with him
I hope he loves you as much as I do
I hope he never hurts you
The pain you have caused me
Will never go away
And I hope that you never know how it feels
To lose the person you hold closer
Than anyone in the world
I told you everything about me
I told you about all of my hopes and dreams
You told me that you loved the way I thought
If so, why did you leave me
What did I do wrong
You said you loved the way I felt about you
And that I had the courage to tell you
And then you come back and say
That I am to loving
You once told me that it wasn't a bad thing
Well, loving you to much, is what made you leave
When you left, it destroyed me
I broke down and cried
I hadn't cried in years
My heart is now empty
And I don't know that I will ever love again
Just know that i have never stopped loving you
And I never will
Though you have hurt me
And broke me
I have to live on
I hate living without you
I will never forget you
But you will forget me
It may not be soon
But I will gently fade from your memory
You will hear my voice, but not be able to place it
Just another voice from the past
That is what I will become to you
So I say my goodbye to you
And hope that you will always be happy
Goodbye





Copyright © RichardGillis ... [ 2006-11-23 23:31:02]
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Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 04:53:12 AM AEST
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Surely these words have given you closure


Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 04:20:49 PM AEST
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A long poem, which shows how much was on your mind and how much you needed to shed emotionally.
Hope it gives you some peace now

Steve


Re: Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by spiritwind on Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:48:46 PM AEST
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I hope this write was medicine to your hurting soul.




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