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Array ( [sid] => 128489 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead [time] => 2006-11-20 20:44:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Kill Me.
Close These Eyes.
Stick me back into the Dark.
Is That any different to being Dead?
If i was without you, all alone
forever
would you ever call me Alive?

No.
I Begin.
The moment i see your face.
That Smile and warm Embrace.
I Am Alive,
When i Awake to Gaze into those Eyes.

When we are Apart
It is like i am Sawn in Half.
The Better part has left,
I am Awake.
But I Am Dead.

Waiting for you.
light me up
Fire me up.
as only you can do.
your the only You in the world
The only You made for Me
The only you in my life
dont leave my Life
You are My Life.

You Leave.
Im Dead.

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Dead

Contributed by Inverted on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 08:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Kill Me.
Close These Eyes.
Stick me back into the Dark.
Is That any different to being Dead?
If i was without you, all alone
forever
would you ever call me Alive?

No.
I Begin.
The moment i see your face.
That Smile and warm Embrace.
I Am Alive,
When i Awake to Gaze into those Eyes.

When we are Apart
It is like i am Sawn in Half.
The Better part has left,
I am Awake.
But I Am Dead.

Waiting for you.
light me up
Fire me up.
as only you can do.
your the only You in the world
The only You made for Me
The only you in my life
dont leave my Life
You are My Life.

You Leave.
Im Dead.

Copyright © Inverted ... [ 2006-11-20 20:44:02]
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Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 08:47:56 PM AEST
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awesome write! i know this feeling well!

nicely done,

wiz

Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 10:56:49 PM AEST
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ohhhh....this is a sad sad write...you have expressed this feeling so well........it's heart wrenching....i understand it so much, although i cannot say that i have been in this situation yet....but it's definantly the way i feel for my husband to be....i don't know what i will do if he ever leaves ...decides he doesn't love me....i fear that so much because everyone who claims to love me, leave me in the long run...though i've never loved anyone the way i love him...so i just hope with all i have that he never stops loving me....and that we have the strength to make it through even the hardest of times...

Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by evangelise on Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 10:39:39 AM AEST
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very well wrote, very expressive.
the things that love can do to use, and the way it makes use feel.
well done

Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 04:22:58 AM AEST
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I see this poem as fear
fearing a loss of someone dear
Loving means each be free
Being alone feeling the breeze
To do together or be alone
True love will always come home

Emotional write !

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