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Array ( [sid] => 128314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losers Load [time] => 2006-11-16 16:51:43 [hometext] => Once again...Thank God, the Goddess, Buddha...I'm not in this place anymore [bodytext] =>
With no way to defend~

one must simply try & pretend

That yesterdays failure hasn't stayed its course...

All the same in the end~

what opportunities life sends

When only taken by the hand thats felt forced...

To exist or survive~

isn't the same thing as alive

Left with only the kind of warmth felt when burned...

No conquering the divide~

by one who will instead contrive

An easier way to reach what for is yearned...

Ahead lies the regret~

for what by each day is upset

Replacing hope with the fear of tomorrow...

When nothing head on met~

becomes the losers safety net

Ones own lacking creates a life of sorrow...

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Losers Load

Contributed by MisfitMe on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 04:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

With no way to defend~

one must simply try & pretend

That yesterdays failure hasn't stayed its course...

All the same in the end~

what opportunities life sends

When only taken by the hand thats felt forced...

To exist or survive~

isn't the same thing as alive

Left with only the kind of warmth felt when burned...

No conquering the divide~

by one who will instead contrive

An easier way to reach what for is yearned...

Ahead lies the regret~

for what by each day is upset

Replacing hope with the fear of tomorrow...

When nothing head on met~

becomes the losers safety net

Ones own lacking creates a life of sorrow...

Copyright © MisfitMe ... [ 2006-11-16 16:51:43]
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Re: Losers Load (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 11:03:23 PM AEST
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Blessed be never there again...
grateful to create our own realty at the very least we create our perception of reality.

Have you heard of the documentary the secret?
http://whatisthesecret.tv/

I hope there is much healing for you in sharing these words. To many and especially children use such bad intentioned imaginary lines drawn on the soil of our psyches to factionalize and compartmentalize each other...
god forfend actually having the good character to respect and to feel everyones feelings as our own.

Peace
Bro Yang

Re: Losers Load (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 10:24:10 PM AEST
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Some lovely descriptions here - I especially enjoyed the scorch of survival as opposed to the radiant warmth of living for something grander than just the next day or the next fix.
A well contsructed poem with a desperate theme - I'm glad for you being out of it.

S

Re: Losers Load (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 05:21:30 PM AEST
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Sweet MissyMe you were never a loser & you'll never ever be one my dear & special friend. I know that ones self lacking can cause them to think this, but this is not so with you. That specialness to you touches my heart and I felt this from the first time you made your way to us here @YPDC. You have a uniqueness to you and God has bestowed the gift of writing onto you to share your experiences with us. You are a blessing to our poetic souls my dear friend. Write on sweet moon maiden~
much love n hugs,
sue m

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