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Array ( [sid] => 128132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life on mute. [time] => 2006-11-12 19:50:25 [hometext] => I know my stanzas aren't all the same length. [bodytext] => A brutal fight
last thursday night
blood fell from my nose
and now I have bruises
from my head to my toes.
"A tissue my dear"
said a boy that was near.
His front two teeth were crooked.

He wiped my tears
I could tell he had a few beers.
"So who won?" he said
I just turned my head
He told me his name was Aiden.

He talked to me
for the rest of the night
his eyes were green
and his teeth were white.
We walked all around this place
all night through the city
he told me even with make up streaked down my face
that I still looked pretty.
He held my hand.

We walked through the park
and kissed each other
in the dark.
He was amazing
in his own way
and I wouldn't even try to say
I wish he was mine.

We ran through the sprinklers in the grass
I wanted this feeling to forever last
I showed him my apartment.

He said I'm someone he'll always remember
he came to visit every 25th of december.
He calls me his cuddledud.

On december 25th 2038
he asked me
to go on a date.
From behind his back
he pulled out a rose
got on one knee
and he proposed.
He smelled really good that day.

He told me when we met
he ment every word he said.
Even if he looked awful
and his speech was slurred
He's totally in love with me
and I never had to say a word.



( If you don't understand the title, the girl in this poem is a mute.) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 2 [informant] => miss_erika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Life on mute.

Contributed by miss_erika on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 07:50:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A brutal fight
last thursday night
blood fell from my nose
and now I have bruises
from my head to my toes.
"A tissue my dear"
said a boy that was near.
His front two teeth were crooked.

He wiped my tears
I could tell he had a few beers.
"So who won?" he said
I just turned my head
He told me his name was Aiden.

He talked to me
for the rest of the night
his eyes were green
and his teeth were white.
We walked all around this place
all night through the city
he told me even with make up streaked down my face
that I still looked pretty.
He held my hand.

We walked through the park
and kissed each other
in the dark.
He was amazing
in his own way
and I wouldn't even try to say
I wish he was mine.

We ran through the sprinklers in the grass
I wanted this feeling to forever last
I showed him my apartment.

He said I'm someone he'll always remember
he came to visit every 25th of december.
He calls me his cuddledud.

On december 25th 2038
he asked me
to go on a date.
From behind his back
he pulled out a rose
got on one knee
and he proposed.
He smelled really good that day.

He told me when we met
he ment every word he said.
Even if he looked awful
and his speech was slurred
He's totally in love with me
and I never had to say a word.



( If you don't understand the title, the girl in this poem is a mute.)




Copyright © miss_erika ... [ 2006-11-12 19:50:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Life on mute. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:07:37 PM AEST
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an incredible write!
huggs,
emy


Re: Life on mute. (User Rating: 1 )
by Epic on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:32:16 PM AEST
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what a story
beautiful


Re: Life on mute. (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 10:46:41 PM AEST
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nice write, and your stanzas dont have to be the same length...

nicely done,

wiz




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