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Array ( [sid] => 127974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories Of A Mentor [time] => 2006-11-08 12:21:18 [hometext] => I have my doubts you will ever see this Mr. Hardesty, but still ... [bodytext] =>


I thought of you today
for the first time
in a very long while.
I held a hammer in my hand,
listening to it sing
as you taught me to
all those years ago.
I remembered the lessons,
the hours of practice,
repeated attempts to emulate
your amazing abilities.
So many times you chastised,
thrusting me aside
to demonstrate once again.
Time after countless time
you would reiterate
technique meant nothing
without patience and finesse.
I watched as you sculpted,
your tools dancing, shaping,
changing the surfaces upon which
they made your music.
I recalled the day you held the chisel
while I swung the sledge;
the innumerable times
you made me promise
not to smash your hands.
Do you remember?
I was so focused,
so intent on that
singular point of contact,
I swung the hammer back
and connected …
with your head.
I was much younger then.
I have grown, and you …
you have probably forgotten
far more than I will ever know
about manipulating metal.

I thought of you today
and I thought it possible …

I might have made you proud.





( author's note: of the many influences and individuals that have shaped my life, Sherman Hardesty, I count you as one of the largest contributors. I doubt I ever said it enough then, and likely never could hope to now ... but thank you, for everything you taught me, thank you. )



~ Nazmythian ~


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Memories Of A Mentor

Contributed by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 12:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems






I thought of you today
for the first time
in a very long while.
I held a hammer in my hand,
listening to it sing
as you taught me to
all those years ago.
I remembered the lessons,
the hours of practice,
repeated attempts to emulate
your amazing abilities.
So many times you chastised,
thrusting me aside
to demonstrate once again.
Time after countless time
you would reiterate
technique meant nothing
without patience and finesse.
I watched as you sculpted,
your tools dancing, shaping,
changing the surfaces upon which
they made your music.
I recalled the day you held the chisel
while I swung the sledge;
the innumerable times
you made me promise
not to smash your hands.
Do you remember?
I was so focused,
so intent on that
singular point of contact,
I swung the hammer back
and connected …
with your head.
I was much younger then.
I have grown, and you …
you have probably forgotten
far more than I will ever know
about manipulating metal.

I thought of you today
and I thought it possible …

I might have made you proud.





( author's note: of the many influences and individuals that have shaped my life, Sherman Hardesty, I count you as one of the largest contributors. I doubt I ever said it enough then, and likely never could hope to now ... but thank you, for everything you taught me, thank you. )



~ Nazmythian ~






Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2006-11-08 12:21:18]
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Re: Memories Of A Mentor (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 12:45:38 PM AEST
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Nazzy,

a wonderful tribute. I could see you there with him while reading this.
~Michelle~


Re: Memories Of A Mentor (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 01:58:59 PM AEST
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there are so many people that influence our lives...in so many ways.

Yet..there are those few.....

Great tribute!


Re: Memories Of A Mentor (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 06:27:40 PM AEST
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This is a heart filling song of the 'guild' consciousness from apprentice to journeyman to master and clearly here you mastery pays its respects to your lineage.

Excellent

Peace
Yang


Re: Memories Of A Mentor (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:15:22 PM AEST
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this is so fabulous nazzy! i was all serious reading it then came to the hammer-to-head part and lost it lol, love your style my friend:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses




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