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[aid] => mick
[title] => Can You See Now?
[time] => 2006-11-07 11:59:09
[hometext] => About this kid, I wrote about him in another poem, two weeks ago saw him with a new girlfriend. This is what resulted. Many stanzas didn't make it on here, but it's good to get the feelings out initially. Enjoy :-)
[bodytext] => written for 10/24/06 Today in the hallway I saw a familiar face Just to watch you walk I fastened my pace. Then I saw another hand Slide down your arm This pretty eyed one had also realized your charm. So there, I stood. My feet still moved but the walls didn't follow. I gripped my arm. But all I could feel was disgusted. I swallowed. My mouth open, in shock and pain Was shut as soon as I could ascertain exactly what just happened. What had just happened? You walked with her down to the end of the hall You both said your goodbyes. And down my body did fall. Down I went, down I stayed and sat. On the floor leaned against the bricks I thought I'd never feel again Lead myself to the sticks [and put me out of my misery.] Because you've got a new half, and because you've found a similar soul, it's made it more clear to me, I'll never be your pink heart, your bright eyes, what makes you whole. So I got up, and smiled and played it off till later I knew I could cry another time But for now "things couldn't be greater", right? Right? Will I really hold this in so long? Can there be a living outlet? Do I really have to feign any smile I make, and with your face to forget? Now you have a significant other and no one still takes how I feel seriously and it's all too much for now. My arms hurt I should test this. And see if someone now believes me. I want to see if your face is still beautiful, yes, your hair is still perfect even when I'm scaring you. Maybe this gun will prove that I really really really really like you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 30 [informant] => sally-heart-jack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
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