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Array ( [sid] => 127911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Like You [time] => 2006-11-06 21:12:50 [hometext] => Words and actions are like ripples in a pond, but the waves will never settle, the restlessness never truly gone... [bodytext] => I see you weakened,
Downtrodden, hanging by a thread,
And all I want to do is break you,
Leave you for dead.

I see you struggle,
You are longing for escape,
You'll do anything to make me go away,
But it's too late.

You ruined my days,
Burned down my feeble walls,
And now I'm coming after you,
With merciless brutality and all.

They told you to stop,
Don't push me over the edge.
Now I bet you wish
You had listened to what they said.

This is what you wanted anyway, right?
To breed a monster that won't forgive,
One that would make you question
Why you ever dared to live.

Leave the child to cry in the corner,
Don't have a second go while they're down,
Or else their cries of revenge
Will knock from your head your tear-stained crown. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Just Like You

Contributed by Chamaron on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

I see you weakened,
Downtrodden, hanging by a thread,
And all I want to do is break you,
Leave you for dead.

I see you struggle,
You are longing for escape,
You'll do anything to make me go away,
But it's too late.

You ruined my days,
Burned down my feeble walls,
And now I'm coming after you,
With merciless brutality and all.

They told you to stop,
Don't push me over the edge.
Now I bet you wish
You had listened to what they said.

This is what you wanted anyway, right?
To breed a monster that won't forgive,
One that would make you question
Why you ever dared to live.

Leave the child to cry in the corner,
Don't have a second go while they're down,
Or else their cries of revenge
Will knock from your head your tear-stained crown.

Copyright © Chamaron ... [ 2006-11-06 21:12:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:21:03 PM AEST
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Awesome, i like this write a lot... I love the imagry in the last stanza "Or else their cries of revenge
Will knock from your head your tear-stained crown" Kiip it up...

Re: Just Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 09:29:51 PM AEST
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Deeply moving to the extent that I can feel the, "Mom" in me welling up with the want to comfort.

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe

Re: Just Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 10:23:18 PM AEST
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ha i like this a lot, i think it's laid out and well written to my darker tasts keep it up

Re: Just Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 02:00:26 AM AEST
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This is an amazing poem! I like it a lot... keep it up! :p
luvs ya
.::Jess::.

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