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Array ( [sid] => 127661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm not a slave! [time] => 2006-10-31 14:21:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Here I am
Trying to have a break
Break from family, stress & chest that keeps hurting me when im depressed
Thinking i'll be ok if i go on holiday
A holiday that would release all of ma pain
Living with another part of ma family is totally insane
I hate living here
Its only been 5 days
They treat me like a slave
Im here to enjoy as much as I can
Knowing when I'm back its gonna be same & whack
Theres nothing that Im satisfied with
I want to explore, go out & be in peace
But I cant
Im living in this boredome house,
Where ma family dont even take me out
Am I here to clean their house?
Why don't they just keep a slave and let me out
Sometimes,
Working at their shop for free
Excuse me but it costs a fee!
Usin up all ma energy
I get tired, u get me?
I aint gonna let you treat me like this
A piece of ****, you don't know how it feels
And you shouting at me all the time
Giving me your attitude thinkin it will be alright
Making me feel unwanted
So lonely, my opinions are not wanted
You dont care about me
Good,
I'm glad you overheard me,
On the phone,
When I was telling my parents,
That Im tired of living here and this place is hell!
And now you deny my slavery I worked for you
A lie your a ***** and thats the truth
1 more week to go
lets see what it brings and i'll catch da flow [comments] => 2 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 6 [informant] => saloni [notes] => Edited for language - please follow the site rules. Mod 8 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
I'm not a slave!

Contributed by saloni on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 02:21:59 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Here I am
Trying to have a break
Break from family, stress & chest that keeps hurting me when im depressed
Thinking i'll be ok if i go on holiday
A holiday that would release all of ma pain
Living with another part of ma family is totally insane
I hate living here
Its only been 5 days
They treat me like a slave
Im here to enjoy as much as I can
Knowing when I'm back its gonna be same & whack
Theres nothing that Im satisfied with
I want to explore, go out & be in peace
But I cant
Im living in this boredome house,
Where ma family dont even take me out
Am I here to clean their house?
Why don't they just keep a slave and let me out
Sometimes,
Working at their shop for free
Excuse me but it costs a fee!
Usin up all ma energy
I get tired, u get me?
I aint gonna let you treat me like this
A piece of ****, you don't know how it feels
And you shouting at me all the time
Giving me your attitude thinkin it will be alright
Making me feel unwanted
So lonely, my opinions are not wanted
You dont care about me
Good,
I'm glad you overheard me,
On the phone,
When I was telling my parents,
That Im tired of living here and this place is hell!
And now you deny my slavery I worked for you
A lie your a ***** and thats the truth
1 more week to go
lets see what it brings and i'll catch da flow




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Re: I'm not a slave! (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 04:21:48 PM AEST
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This is a rap innit? Bet you can't wait to go home. hope things improve for real.


Re: I'm not a slave! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 06:15:21 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem. I can really feel the anger




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