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[sid] => 127394
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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Void_Her Words
[time] => 2006-10-25 14:37:05
[hometext] => I wrote this as she was writing; then I wrote The Void as he was reading-so I went backwards on it. I have one more but let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => The paper was plain with no fragrant smell She glanced down before she began ‘Dear’ instead of ‘To’? She thought to herself She waited a moment and cleared her throat What can be said to a man that was never home? How can she make him understand why she must go? She sat down and cried as she jot down her words She never thought it would hurt so She shook with fear he would enter the room She sighed with relief as she began once more She opened the window in the room Enjoyed the fresh air in this gloomy mood She looked to her right and an image was seen They were hugging and kissing on their third anniversary She took a moment to wipe her tears Remembering how he used to be The jokes he told that made her laugh The surprises she got – Just because She noticed a bottle on the floor Probably from last night as he came home ‘A drink to ease my nerves’-she thought No, that is not the answering she is looking for She tries to finish her last paragraph She writes ‘she could have given more’ She lifts her head and looks around She notices the glass on the kitchen floor The wedding picture she did break She was upset and hurt- What was she to do? She sat back down and put the picture aside She remembered his words on their wedding day “You filled my void with your soul, love, and touch” She repeated the words back to him She was so overwhelmed with joy that day She folds the letter and puts it on the table She sighs and wishes this would have gone differently She leaves no impression of returning She opens the door with one last say “Good-bye and I love you” [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 2 [informant] => europeanprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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