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Array ( [sid] => 127178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => nothing left [time] => 2006-10-20 12:25:31 [hometext] => Everyone has had a bad breakup... this is one of my happier poems, just to let you know how depressed I had gotten... Try not to let it happen to you... and don't let anyone take away your love and passion... Read on... [bodytext] =>
shards of glass surround her broken heart, lay there flat on the ground
thrown with intensity only slightly greater than the fire it burned with
rough was it's outside with a core of such fragility an infant could rupture it

Yet there he stood with but a grin upon his muderous face
He had ripped her limb from limb, left her lying cold and naked
Without a word of comfort in her time of need

She felt her insides empty out, and then... nothing
All went dark, and faded away as she slipped into peace
as her blood, red with love, seeped through the cracks in the floor

Finally he would know how much she loved him
Finally he would see how immensly she cared
For she left him the only thing she had left

A broken heart, surrounded in shards
She hoped he would feel as guilty
As she felt woebegone [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ourangoutang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
nothing left

Contributed by ourangoutang on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 12:25:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




shards of glass surround her broken heart, lay there flat on the ground
thrown with intensity only slightly greater than the fire it burned with
rough was it's outside with a core of such fragility an infant could rupture it

Yet there he stood with but a grin upon his muderous face
He had ripped her limb from limb, left her lying cold and naked
Without a word of comfort in her time of need

She felt her insides empty out, and then... nothing
All went dark, and faded away as she slipped into peace
as her blood, red with love, seeped through the cracks in the floor

Finally he would know how much she loved him
Finally he would see how immensly she cared
For she left him the only thing she had left

A broken heart, surrounded in shards
She hoped he would feel as guilty
As she felt woebegone




Copyright © ourangoutang ... [ 2006-10-20 12:25:31]
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Re: nothing left (User Rating: 1 )
by aloneinthememory on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 05:08:02 PM AEST
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Wow thats intense. I like it alot.

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