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I just feel like posting it.

Comments/advice are ALWAYS welcome.

____________________________

crushed into pieces
staring into darkness
lay here without a sound
searching through my memories

you didn't even attempt
to delve
into my soul
fascination took hold
as if you were Faust
you sold your soul
to the Devil

************

tears turned ice cold
froze like they didn't matter
say but one word
as you walk away [comments] => 5 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 43 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You Are Just Like Faust

Contributed by The_Unknown on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 09:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don't know why I'm posting this really. It's not that great.
I just feel like posting it.

Comments/advice are ALWAYS welcome.

____________________________

crushed into pieces
staring into darkness
lay here without a sound
searching through my memories

you didn't even attempt
to delve
into my soul
fascination took hold
as if you were Faust
you sold your soul
to the Devil

************

tears turned ice cold
froze like they didn't matter
say but one word
as you walk away

Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-10-16 21:11:00]
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Re: You Are Just Like Faust (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 09:37:39 PM AEST
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you didn't even attempt
to delve
into my soul......

I love it; I relate somehow.

Re: You Are Just Like Faust (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:25:49 PM AEST
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Don't be too critical - this isn't a bad piece at all. Quite a lot of feeling and meaning in this. The second stanza is very nice.
My life has felt a little like this of late - with the whole reshuffling of everything and learning what I actually mean to some ppl I know.
Nice write!

- Tim

Re: You Are Just Like Faust (User Rating: 1 )
by trueecho on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 12:14:06 PM AEST
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women troubles..hear ya..

Re: You Are Just Like Faust (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 03:52:36 PM AEST
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um yeah, thanks for the comment. But I am kind of a girl... lol.
.::Jess::.

Re: You Are Just Like Faust (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 06:29:42 AM AEST
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I love it.

Jess, you are...simply amazing xD

this is really good.

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