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Like lilies in the breeze.
The energy of a hearts song,
Abundantly streaming forth,
Like a brook after the snow melts.
And like his music so soft and blue,
His feet never touch the ground of time,
As the free wind blows where it chooses,
So his heart is.
His voice like the sunrise full of awe-inspiring light,
And the very air around him dances with ease,
To the beat of his spirit's symphony,
His eyes brighter then the lightening of storms fury,
And his face as calm as the ocean beneath the waves,
The light of dawn envies the cream colors of his soul,
Those around him are held fast by his gaze of spring's passion,
Oh how his music is beyond words even the birds can sing,
Gentler than winters first snowfall he is,
As he touches the strings of angels enchantment,
And the heavens open as the stars burn,
He plays his melody, his sonata, his kindness,
For all to be enthralled with his light of purity.

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Light of Purity.

Contributed by alison on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 01:24:11 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

The sweet flow of music,
Like lilies in the breeze.
The energy of a hearts song,
Abundantly streaming forth,
Like a brook after the snow melts.
And like his music so soft and blue,
His feet never touch the ground of time,
As the free wind blows where it chooses,
So his heart is.
His voice like the sunrise full of awe-inspiring light,
And the very air around him dances with ease,
To the beat of his spirit's symphony,
His eyes brighter then the lightening of storms fury,
And his face as calm as the ocean beneath the waves,
The light of dawn envies the cream colors of his soul,
Those around him are held fast by his gaze of spring's passion,
Oh how his music is beyond words even the birds can sing,
Gentler than winters first snowfall he is,
As he touches the strings of angels enchantment,
And the heavens open as the stars burn,
He plays his melody, his sonata, his kindness,
For all to be enthralled with his light of purity.

Copyright © alison ... [ 2006-10-13 13:24:11]
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Re: Light of Purity. (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos31 on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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loved the use of language.

Re: Light of Purity. (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 08:21:47 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a very passionate piece!
I completely agree with Chaos - the use of language is very very good!
Wow... I don't know what else to say really...
It's just so full of feeling...
Very good write!!

- Tim

Re: Light of Purity. (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:19:00 AM AEST
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Really beautiful poem.. xxx

Re: Light of Purity. (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 08:10:32 AM AEST
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i'm with chaos here, perfect use of words and language... makes this write so beautiful and perfect... well done

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