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Array ( [sid] => 126850 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be Gone. [time] => 2006-10-12 21:40:32 [hometext] => I am feeling empty, my mind speaks in languages I don't know, release me of these demons that haunt me [bodytext] => With every hiss I feel You slowly leave me,
I call Your name but You don't answer me.
I wave the clouds by and call the rain,
but thoughts tell me It's not my realm to reign.

The overcast shadows the lands so bleak,
I call Your name, yet You don't speak?

I feel it's not my place to intervene again,
but situations called it neccesary to defeat the problem?

Why have I no anger left or sympathy to show,
did I die yet again, when will it all go?

The end seems so distant off,
mileage I've yet to cover,
I call Your name, yet the answers in the air only hover?

-

I have no regrets, no sympathy for my actions,
no wave-me-by's or behind-closed-door's mutter,
the mirror shows only a casing, the blinding light shows only white,
the glass cut only showed signs of blood,
yet the pain was gone, only twitching to the stutter of broken time.

I seek no comfort in things that come to mind,
walls hide your shadows - I'll still see you even if I was blind -
your presence disgusts me, yet the envy of power frustates me,
you glide the walls, you ride the tides, you watch carefully as things die...

you want the power I once possessed,
I have no desire for it anymore, yet you call back the dark times,
every candle burnt, every hymn sound, the anger that broke lives...

-

No more, the evil hasn't gone, it won't confess to what its done,
it watches as sympathy turns to apathy - love turns to hate -

you call me, I won't answer.
you tempt me, I won't give in.
you offer yourself, I won't have need.

...be gone, I ask no forgiveness for what I've done. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Be Gone.

Contributed by Kellros on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 09:40:32 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



With every hiss I feel You slowly leave me,
I call Your name but You don't answer me.
I wave the clouds by and call the rain,
but thoughts tell me It's not my realm to reign.

The overcast shadows the lands so bleak,
I call Your name, yet You don't speak?

I feel it's not my place to intervene again,
but situations called it neccesary to defeat the problem?

Why have I no anger left or sympathy to show,
did I die yet again, when will it all go?

The end seems so distant off,
mileage I've yet to cover,
I call Your name, yet the answers in the air only hover?

-

I have no regrets, no sympathy for my actions,
no wave-me-by's or behind-closed-door's mutter,
the mirror shows only a casing, the blinding light shows only white,
the glass cut only showed signs of blood,
yet the pain was gone, only twitching to the stutter of broken time.

I seek no comfort in things that come to mind,
walls hide your shadows - I'll still see you even if I was blind -
your presence disgusts me, yet the envy of power frustates me,
you glide the walls, you ride the tides, you watch carefully as things die...

you want the power I once possessed,
I have no desire for it anymore, yet you call back the dark times,
every candle burnt, every hymn sound, the anger that broke lives...

-

No more, the evil hasn't gone, it won't confess to what its done,
it watches as sympathy turns to apathy - love turns to hate -

you call me, I won't answer.
you tempt me, I won't give in.
you offer yourself, I won't have need.

...be gone, I ask no forgiveness for what I've done.




Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2006-10-12 21:40:32]
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Re: Be Gone. (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 10:06:03 PM AEST
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I like your work... Your style... It's sad that great pain
is the muse to your pen... Forgive yourself and you
have forgivness...


Thank You for sharing...

Bill


Re: Be Gone. (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 11:18:41 PM AEST
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i like this write so nicly written thanks for sharing


Re: Be Gone. (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:52:54 PM AEST
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Such a deep poem.. I liked the style and flow of this poem... It was a really great poem... I can relate to feeling empty...

Take care
Christina




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