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What can you do when you are feeling depressed…
How did you get yourself into this mess…

When you’re at the lowest of lows…
When there just is no where else to go…

Take notice that it’s in your own reach…
Listen to others they have a lot to teach…

People that talk to you when they know your trouble…
Are friends that will help your accent double…

Your mind plays games when you can’t find a way…
Your negative thoughts can last all day…

God gave us hands to lift ourselves up…
To pull those up that are down on their luck…

Remember always things are only as bad as they seem…
Hold your head up and stay in your dream…

There is always some one worse off than yourself…

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HELP! You need somebody!

Contributed by oneir8dude on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:26:47 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems





What can you do when you are feeling depressed…
How did you get yourself into this mess…

When you’re at the lowest of lows…
When there just is no where else to go…

Take notice that it’s in your own reach…
Listen to others they have a lot to teach…

People that talk to you when they know your trouble…
Are friends that will help your accent double…

Your mind plays games when you can’t find a way…
Your negative thoughts can last all day…

God gave us hands to lift ourselves up…
To pull those up that are down on their luck…

Remember always things are only as bad as they seem…
Hold your head up and stay in your dream…

There is always some one worse off than yourself…





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Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 06:05:34 PM AEST
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Brought tears to my eyes. Very beautiful my friend. Also very true. You were there a couple nights for me and for that I thankyou!

~Michelle~

ps your right, God seems to send those to us when we need them most:)


Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:24:37 PM AEST
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An amazing, uplifting write. That last line... you couldn't be more right. Thank you for sharing.
Peace to you, my friend.
Laura


Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:06:40 PM AEST
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I love the poem and the artwork is stupendous..what a good job..right through the hoop!


Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:10:23 PM AEST
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Dearest Bill~
A most uplifting and inspiring write. You words are so true my friend. Had tears in my eyes. I know what it's like travelling down the path of depression, but it's with the help of amazing and beautiful friends that help us on our way again. I am very lucky for I have been blessed with a wonderful circle of friends.
An outstanding write filled with inspiration~
Thanks for posting this dearest Bill~
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M


Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:39:25 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, wise, writing.
Did u do the art work? It's great too.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: HELP! You need somebody! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 10:13:43 PM AEST
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  • Wow, such an inspirational write.

    *suddenly feels stronger* Heheh.

    This really made my day.
    Thankyou. ;)




    Kat.





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