 |
Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
|
||||
| Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 10-June 22:08:20 AEST | ||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
Array
(
[sid] => 126700
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Can You Feel It?
[time] => 2006-10-08 18:24:40
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => Something I've been working on since last week. Undergone 3 or 4 edits. This is the form I'm most happy with at the moment. Although this is subject to change. Inspired by 'Under the Ivy' - Kate Bush and 'Where the Wild Roses Grow' - by Kylie Minogue and Nick Cave. Both of which I recommend to listen to, or failing that, just check the lyrics on google. There's supposed to be a form of magical romantiscm here. Hope. And it's also supposed to have a lyrical feel about it. Feedback would be really appreciated. Can You Feel It? Woman It won't take long for me to tell you The place where I hide The place you can find me When I am not around Man Will you tell me where to find you? Woman If you shook me gently You could wake me Bring me back to this place And I'd leave my secret deep inside Man Will you tell me where to find you? When I need to touch you When I need to breathe you Woman If you ever want to find me I'll be in the dream Special space Room for one more Man Will you tell me where to find you? When I need to touch you When I need to breathe you You tell me 'bout the garden Woman So if you wake me gently Show me how you feel If you feel it truly I will show you where I belong Man The place under the roses You say that's where I'll find you It starts off so empty I let the silence grow Woman When I know you well You'll be able to call to me When I'm in my space You'll be able to reach me Man Then I can feel you there You're in the dream And I can almost touch you Know that you are there Together And when we're lost Man I can go down to the garden Woman I can go into my dream Together The curve under the roses And then we will be found [comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Sproglet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
|
Menu
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©
Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster
All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com
All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.
Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com