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Array ( [sid] => 126512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2006-10-03 17:19:51 [hometext] => About how three little words can change everything [bodytext] => Those words you no longer comprehend, Twist and flit, and break and bend, The meaning’s lost when you say them aloud, Sorry’s not a phrase for the proud, You read the writing up there on that wall, You made me stumble, crumble and crawl, You stuck in the knife, and then twisted it round, You cut me open; and look what you found, Those words you cannot comprehend, Fall from me, and break and bend, I love you’s lost, when the heart’s broken; I love you’s lost, when the words are spoken. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Ruby2sdy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove ) You Contributed by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 05:19:51 PM in AEST Topic: LostLove Those words you no longer comprehend, Twist and flit, and break and bend, The meaning’s lost when you say them aloud, Sorry’s not a phrase for the proud, You read the writing up there on that wall, You made me stumble, crumble and crawl, You stuck in the knife, and then twisted it round, You cut me open; and look what you found, Those words you cannot comprehend, Fall from me, and break and bend, I love you’s lost, when the heart’s broken; I love you’s lost, when the words are spoken. Copyright Â© Ruby2sdy ... [ 2006-10-03 17:19:51] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 06:17:32 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Very well written. Enjoyed the read. Sorry anyone has to know how that feels....to have someone build you up..just to tear you down. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 07:54:25 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Oh my .. 2sdy .. this is incredible!! It reached right in and gripped me .. such a tortured write, my friend. I knew by the category that it would not be an easy read .. but I was not prepared for the flood of intimately painful emotion you showered on us. Exceptionally emotive write. impressed, as always ~Breezy Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 08:03:53 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) 2sdy~ A most sad and heartwrenching write. Breezy sums it all up for me. A sad, but most impressive write. You have been missed dearly my friend. I hope that all is well with you~ take care. love, hugs n prayers, Sue M Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:00:04 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) sorry is not a word to be spoken unless it''s meant..too often it's just another word..enjoyed the write..it was well crafted. Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:49:59 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) very deep emotions felt here you are a good writter and rhymer as well just keep on writing till briter days and i will be here reading all along Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 01:58:25 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) A really sad write, and very emotional. You describe these feelings so well. Very well written piece. Sue x Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by Leoricx on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 04:10:02 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Those are three powerful little words. When said with meaning they seem to freeze time. But when they're said without meaning, as you say, without comprehension, when it's said just for the sake of saying it, that when you get a situation like you have written about. Well written and full of emotion, the repetition at the end really helps to hammer home the point. Well done :D Re: You (User Rating: 1 ) by wrdz on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 02:41:22 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Like Breezy said, it was not only a difficult read, but it had to be just as difficult to write. Two thumbs up for this piece. Thank you for sharing it. wrdz

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