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Array ( [sid] => 126460 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The lady of the lake [time] => 2006-10-02 17:27:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lady of the lake,
I see you in the waters,
Mist shrouds your beauty splendour,
Evening sun pierces the trees,

I see you Glide to the water edge,
Beauty exquisite,
Your threadlike garments drape around you,
Posture perfect,
No ripple disturbs,
Mysterious lady,
Graceful ballerina of the woods,

No bird is heard,
No creature stirs,
For nothing could disturb such enchanting magnificence,

She comes to immerse me in her lagoon,
Her eyes draw me in,
As if a noose is set around my neck,
Pulls me in,
Into her magical spell,
White witch of the waters,
I am yours. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => topcatcrowther [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The lady of the lake

Contributed by topcatcrowther on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:27:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Lady of the lake,
I see you in the waters,
Mist shrouds your beauty splendour,
Evening sun pierces the trees,

I see you Glide to the water edge,
Beauty exquisite,
Your threadlike garments drape around you,
Posture perfect,
No ripple disturbs,
Mysterious lady,
Graceful ballerina of the woods,

No bird is heard,
No creature stirs,
For nothing could disturb such enchanting magnificence,

She comes to immerse me in her lagoon,
Her eyes draw me in,
As if a noose is set around my neck,
Pulls me in,
Into her magical spell,
White witch of the waters,
I am yours.

Copyright © topcatcrowther ... [ 2006-10-02 17:27:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The lady of the lake (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:33:00 PM AEST
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good imagery
i could really picture the still water and her pulling
you in..

catz

Re: The lady of the lake (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:35:01 PM AEST
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Great description here, nice write.

Re: The lady of the lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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nice display of wording and well written too
i really liked this poem you have talent so keep on using it
and i will be reading

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