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She was the greatest friend.
She was the best to talk to.
When I needed someone,
she was there.
She was my angel in this hellish world.
She was my love, my heart, my soul, my best friend.
She meant so much to me,
yet she did not even know it.
Even if she did, she would not say it.
That time is now gone,
all that is left is a broken heart.
I leave her this poem,
to let her know that I still care.
Now she hates me,
now she will not look at me,
she will not talk to me.
However, I still want her to know that I love her
and I will always have those good memories of us. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 22 [informant] => whiteleo1984 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Her

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 04:18:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She was the light that shined bright in my world.
She was the greatest friend.
She was the best to talk to.
When I needed someone,
she was there.
She was my angel in this hellish world.
She was my love, my heart, my soul, my best friend.
She meant so much to me,
yet she did not even know it.
Even if she did, she would not say it.
That time is now gone,
all that is left is a broken heart.
I leave her this poem,
to let her know that I still care.
Now she hates me,
now she will not look at me,
she will not talk to me.
However, I still want her to know that I love her
and I will always have those good memories of us.

Copyright © whiteleo1984 ... [ 2006-09-28 04:18:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Her (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 05:00:59 AM AEST
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Im sorry it didn't work out for ya man, I've been there, its hard to keep your head up and keep going. But thats what you gotta do, just keep goin on in life. Sooner or later, those wounds will heal and you will move on.

Best wishes....

Eddie Dean

Re: Her (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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I luv your attitude you have in this write.
I know these feelings many times over.
Awesome writing.
Hang tuf.
huggs,
emy

Re: Her (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 12:41:44 PM AEST
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This was a really good poem... I liked it alot.. It was sad that you loved her so much and she couldn't see that... Broken hearts are horrible to have...

Take care
Christina

Re: Her (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer on Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:24:21 AM AEST
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i've been there too bro

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