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Electromagnetic Pulse
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One day it was beautiful
My life was set and full
The wind of fortune was blowing the right way
Nothing foreseen to what would happen today
The skies were full of clouds and pigeons
Thing would work with no actions
The traffic noise was so dense
The commotion was so intense
Dogs were barking and kids were playing
In the air, pollution was stifling
Loud music was on and people talking
Now it is so quiet while Im walking
There now is no one around
There is nothing making a sound
No barking dogs no playing kids
No pollution burning my eyelids
The loud music is gone
Something has gone wrong
The pigeons are no where to be seen
Its not exactly how it has been
My car wont start
I feel a pounding in my heart
I fear for my life
My kids and my wife
I need to find them, right here, right now
My cell doesnt work. I need them but how
I run all the way home cars jam the street
I got home and ran in, I felt a pain in my feet
When did the world stop turning
My fear in my heart was seriously burning
Where are my neighbors and my family
If not for the fear this would make me angry
I ran down the road I jogged thru the yards
I sprinted through peoples houses with no regards
I think the world has vanished from my sight
Is there anyone here to help me with my plight
I hear the towns bell ring its toll
I felt hurt down in my soul
The bell got louder and pounded my head
I thought for sure my family was dead
It was just then when the last bell tolled
I could her my wife. I needed to hold
I blinked my eyes and rubbed them hard
It was her leaning over me, herself unscarred
I was in my room and sweating in my bed
All this, that happened was in my head.
It was all a dream
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oneir8dude
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2006-09-25 23:23:49]
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:44:59 PM AEST
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Thank God it was only a dream.
Awesome writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:01:45 AM AEST
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Good write, man. Had me clinging tightly to each word. Dreams can be sooooooo realistic, sometimes too much so.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:25:27 AM AEST
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This poem kept me reading until the end. What an awesome write. Great job!
sadaddy
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:35:09 AM AEST
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You had me on the edge of my seat. I was so captivated by your write. Dreams can scare the hell out of ya especially the ones that seem so real. I really enjoyed your poem. a job well done thanks for sharing it.
hugs n prayers,
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:26:08 AM AEST
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This was awesome! I kept thinking it was an atomic bomb at first. Your descriptions were so vivid. I loved the ending. Happy ending. Thank you for sharing. Peace to you.
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Re: Electromagnetic Pulse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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Masterfully captivating, Bill! Ya set it up so well in the great title and intro, crescendoed to an anticipated devastating ending then brought us down (or up) gently. Good work!
wabl
KenMoore
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