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Array ( [sid] => 12606 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Did you say forever? [time] => 2003-02-14 13:20:00 [hometext] => My fiance just broke up with me. This is how I feel. [bodytext] => Did you say forever?
I believe that you did.
You claimed that you would love me
as long as I should live.
But somewhere in the middle
forever must have changed.
Because all of a sudden
your love has gone away.
And nothing that I do or say
can make your feelings change.
You do not know the pain inside
You cannot know the grief
Of knowing that you're cast aside
and no longer your special girl.
You no longer call me Baby,
the way you always did.
I'm not your angel, not your darlin
the way I used to be.
Yet that is not even the part
that is hardest on me.
You were my one and only
My knight in armour grand
The one who would protect me
and always held my hand.
No more. No more.
It's all gone. Vanished in one moment.
I can't believe this.........
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 22 [informant] => FreakPrincessJen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Did you say forever?

Contributed by FreakPrincessJen on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Did you say forever?
I believe that you did.
You claimed that you would love me
as long as I should live.
But somewhere in the middle
forever must have changed.
Because all of a sudden
your love has gone away.
And nothing that I do or say
can make your feelings change.
You do not know the pain inside
You cannot know the grief
Of knowing that you're cast aside
and no longer your special girl.
You no longer call me Baby,
the way you always did.
I'm not your angel, not your darlin
the way I used to be.
Yet that is not even the part
that is hardest on me.
You were my one and only
My knight in armour grand
The one who would protect me
and always held my hand.
No more. No more.
It's all gone. Vanished in one moment.
I can't believe this.........

Copyright © FreakPrincessJen ... [ 2003-02-14 13:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Did you say forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 02:01:25 AM AEST
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I dont know what to say without sounding cliched but feel compelled to give you a computer hug.

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