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After the latest, hardcore beat
the newest chemical buzz
riding a tide of cash
no doubt ill-gotten
with paranoia your biggest foe
Everyone’s your friend
- too cool for them
in your flash clothes
and always out
or coming down
A vehicle on NOS
- it’s gonna wear away quickly
Don’t you see the shadows
- your eyes can’t hide it
not like your big smile
or flash clothes
or dopy laugh
And you bring it all to me
- the insomniac always out -
in my flash clothes
- all bought on sale -
and take me like yourself
without noticing my empty table
- for I have nothing to offer -
without noticing my eyes
- no where near as worn as yours.

9/3/06 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 60 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Worn Eyes

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:39:13 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

I know too many guys like you
After the latest, hardcore beat
the newest chemical buzz
riding a tide of cash
no doubt ill-gotten
with paranoia your biggest foe
Everyone’s your friend
- too cool for them
in your flash clothes
and always out
or coming down
A vehicle on NOS
- it’s gonna wear away quickly
Don’t you see the shadows
- your eyes can’t hide it
not like your big smile
or flash clothes
or dopy laugh
And you bring it all to me
- the insomniac always out -
in my flash clothes
- all bought on sale -
and take me like yourself
without noticing my empty table
- for I have nothing to offer -
without noticing my eyes
- no where near as worn as yours.

9/3/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-09-16 02:39:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Worn Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:54:48 AM AEST
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A very frash approach to this subject. I like the way you worded it. great job!

Re: Worn Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by LonelyPoet on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:25:37 PM AEST
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From reading most of your poetry thus far..I'ld say you have an incredible amount to offer anyone..I love your poetry.

Re: Worn Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:02:53 AM AEST
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I've been the shoulder for others before now. It's difficult sometimes to know what they need if you haven't gone through the same thing.

Good job

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