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Array ( [sid] => 125567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving you [time] => 2006-09-10 12:09:29 [hometext] => ...it's when you fall in love !!! :) [bodytext] => I didn't know that the stars were shining
i didn't notice that the sky is blue
i didn't understand why love is so exciting
until i fell in love with you

Your eyes are like stars in my own sky
your smile can colour my whole life
when i hold you, i have the strength to move on
i know, this feeling can't be wrong

You're the only person i can put my trust in
you know me better than anyone, here
in a world full of strangers, dark and dull
you came into my life, you made it full

Loving you i learned to appreciate little things in life
i knew that you'll always be my wasted heart's desire
don't ever leave me, i don't know if i can live
without your love, i waste my time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Evita [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Loving you

Contributed by Evita on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:09:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I didn't know that the stars were shining
i didn't notice that the sky is blue
i didn't understand why love is so exciting
until i fell in love with you

Your eyes are like stars in my own sky
your smile can colour my whole life
when i hold you, i have the strength to move on
i know, this feeling can't be wrong

You're the only person i can put my trust in
you know me better than anyone, here
in a world full of strangers, dark and dull
you came into my life, you made it full

Loving you i learned to appreciate little things in life
i knew that you'll always be my wasted heart's desire
don't ever leave me, i don't know if i can live
without your love, i waste my time

Copyright © Evita ... [ 2006-09-10 12:09:29]
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Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by kiss_yourself_goodbye on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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Wow this is deep

Reminds me of "puppy love"

Keep up the good work

My poems underneath yours, have a read pls, would appreciate feedback

Emma

Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:35:23 PM AEST
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very sweet write! made me smile! great job!!!

Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:55:34 PM AEST
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i only stopped by to see how the site was progressing... but i read this and felt compelled to comment you.

such a beautiful love poem!

it captures the essence of love as only a great poet can

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