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Array ( [sid] => 125545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What do we miss? [time] => 2006-09-09 22:05:00 [hometext] => Rather juvenile and stupid, but hopefully slightly entertaining. [bodytext] => Rarely do we truly look.
You may have studied many books
And missed a secret, hiding there,
Not long after, ceased to care,
Possibly, we’re trained this way
Maybe miss things every day
And if this happened, would we know?
Happily on our way we’d go,
Onward, not knowing what is gone.
Now if you read closely on
Each first letter of each line
You missed a name – and it is mine.

-Ryan P. Mahoney AKA Bobby Zimmerman [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bobbyzimmerman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

What do we miss?

Contributed by bobbyzimmerman on Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Rarely do we truly look.
You may have studied many books
And missed a secret, hiding there,
Not long after, ceased to care,
Possibly, we’re trained this way
Maybe miss things every day
And if this happened, would we know?
Happily on our way we’d go,
Onward, not knowing what is gone.
Now if you read closely on
Each first letter of each line
You missed a name – and it is mine.

-Ryan P. Mahoney AKA Bobby Zimmerman

Copyright Â© bobbyzimmerman ... [ 2006-09-09 22:05:00]
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Re: What do we miss? (User Rating: 1 )
by mazeof_darkness on Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:10:17 PM AEST
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so very true................ how did you do that. this is awsome.....love it

Re: What do we miss? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:33:46 AM AEST
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Quite cleverly done, and the rhyme is good too. Nice work.

Andrew

Re: What do we miss? (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 02:43:44 AM AEST
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Really unique, so clever, apart from your name being there to the poems great. xxxx

Re: What do we miss? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:15:38 AM AEST
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Very clever man, very clever. Geez, guess I have to call you Ryan instead of Dylan, now? Bummer. (Hee Hee) Glad you found YPDC and you share your work. I'll keep reading.
Peace,
Laura

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