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Array ( [sid] => 124995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => and so I sail [time] => 2006-08-28 06:01:42 [hometext] => Just wanted to get away [bodytext] => And so I sail
The waters so free
The wind has no care
Oh the depths of the sea!
This life's so troubled
These tasks these trials these needs
Things I don't want
The many ways we bleed
The hurtful acts
Man against man
All these are gone
When I sail
You say it's my responsibility
I just jibe and rail
Against this truth
It's not on me
I didn't make this mess
Neither the Sea
We are guiltless in this
And the wind is calling
The birds take wing
And so must I
So I'm lost
In my love of sailing
Like a current I flow
Oblivious, my sails full
Lifes cares in my wake
My horizion a glow
With hope and peace
And so I sail
And let go.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 14 [informant] => twbanter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

and so I sail

Contributed by twbanter on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:01:42 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

And so I sail
The waters so free
The wind has no care
Oh the depths of the sea!
This life's so troubled
These tasks these trials these needs
Things I don't want
The many ways we bleed
The hurtful acts
Man against man
All these are gone
When I sail
You say it's my responsibility
I just jibe and rail
Against this truth
It's not on me
I didn't make this mess
Neither the Sea
We are guiltless in this
And the wind is calling
The birds take wing
And so must I
So I'm lost
In my love of sailing
Like a current I flow
Oblivious, my sails full
Lifes cares in my wake
My horizion a glow
With hope and peace
And so I sail
And let go....

Copyright © twbanter ... [ 2006-08-28 06:01:42]
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Re: and so I sail (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:39:40 AM AEST
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Wow man, this was nice. I was caught up in the sailing....so much I was sure I heard seagulls and felt a spray of water.
I'm sailing along too. Thanks for the ride.
Great write.
Peace,
Laura

Re: and so I sail (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:10:58 PM AEST
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Makes me want to set sail, brilliant to sail away from all your cares..xxx

Re: and so I sail (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:52:24 PM AEST
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An impressive way to let all the struggle and
stress of daily life go.

The ending was serene .. enjoyable read Tom.

~Breezy

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