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Array ( [sid] => 124889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani [time] => 2006-08-25 10:25:12 [hometext] => Being Pagan, this is quite interesting that i wrote a christian poem. Anyway, Enjoy :) [bodytext] => Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani

Father;
I stand out in the night
Staring at starry heavens, wondering.
Countles stars made by your hand
will there be one for me?

Father;
My heart has been broken.
In so many ways
In so may pieces
Please tell will i mend?

Father;
The storms of life are coming closer
Growing in strength and fiercenes
Will you be there?
Will you be my rock?
To seek shelter with, when the storm strikes?

Father;
My path has been clouded
No choices left in what was once my vision
Tell me; Will you guide me, show me where to go?

Father;
I speak my mind and soul
The night is quiet
The stars are all dead
The moon shines no more
You are quiet

Father, why have you forsaken me? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 11 [informant] => AerandirA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani

Contributed by AerandirA on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 10:25:12 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani

Father;
I stand out in the night
Staring at starry heavens, wondering.
Countles stars made by your hand
will there be one for me?

Father;
My heart has been broken.
In so many ways
In so may pieces
Please tell will i mend?

Father;
The storms of life are coming closer
Growing in strength and fiercenes
Will you be there?
Will you be my rock?
To seek shelter with, when the storm strikes?

Father;
My path has been clouded
No choices left in what was once my vision
Tell me; Will you guide me, show me where to go?

Father;
I speak my mind and soul
The night is quiet
The stars are all dead
The moon shines no more
You are quiet

Father, why have you forsaken me?

Copyright © AerandirA ... [ 2006-08-25 10:25:12]
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Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:13:37 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece of work...I love this peom..
But know our father will never forsake you...
God Bless!
C.S

Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:17:51 PM AEST
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You say you are a pagan - I tell you that you are not.
I feel like crying tears at your depth of empathy with our Lord's lonliness.and feeling of total abandonment.
Blessed be the poet who can emphasize so deeply !
Very beautiful and stirring
Elizabeth

Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:48:30 AM AEST
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This is a very powerfull loving write.
I find that God has never forsaken me but at times, I forsake him.
We're only human but he is the almighty!
luv, huggs, strength. joy, peace,
emy

Re: Eli, Eli, Lema Sabachtani (User Rating: 1 )
by Kara_Althea on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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I think you're still searching for something. This poem is very heartfelt. He has not abandoned you, know that, my friend. He is always with you.

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