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Array ( [sid] => 124864 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Hatred is your Weakness [time] => 2006-08-24 18:51:45 [hometext] => A purely fictitious look at anger, and why some people have the need to take revenge. Sue x [bodytext] => Your confidence so boldly lacking,
Creates a monster within you,
Your actions cruel and hideous,
Make you look just like a fool,

You mock at those who try to help,
You think your so brave and bold,
But pride it comes before a fall,
Or so I have always been told,

Speak your word with malicious tongue,
And a rod for your back you make,
No reasons for your ignorance,
But its the path you seem to take,

No regrets you have for selfish you are,
No thoughts for others feelings,
You bring them down , whenever you are around,
With your hatred and underhand dealings,

What would it take to change your ways,
And to become less of a thorn in my side,
Does your hurt run deep,is it fast asleep,
Is there someone in whom you can confide,

Well I am sorry to say, you will pay one day,
For the piper will be playing your tune,
For this worm will turn, and make you squirm,
You will have a taste of your own medicine soon,

So be nasty and cold to all you know,
With your bravado so brave, and so bold,
Your come uppance is here, so you better fear,
For revenge is a dish best served cold



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Your Hatred is your Weakness

Contributed by jerseysue on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 06:51:45 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Your confidence so boldly lacking,
Creates a monster within you,
Your actions cruel and hideous,
Make you look just like a fool,

You mock at those who try to help,
You think your so brave and bold,
But pride it comes before a fall,
Or so I have always been told,

Speak your word with malicious tongue,
And a rod for your back you make,
No reasons for your ignorance,
But its the path you seem to take,

No regrets you have for selfish you are,
No thoughts for others feelings,
You bring them down , whenever you are around,
With your hatred and underhand dealings,

What would it take to change your ways,
And to become less of a thorn in my side,
Does your hurt run deep,is it fast asleep,
Is there someone in whom you can confide,

Well I am sorry to say, you will pay one day,
For the piper will be playing your tune,
For this worm will turn, and make you squirm,
You will have a taste of your own medicine soon,

So be nasty and cold to all you know,
With your bravado so brave, and so bold,
Your come uppance is here, so you better fear,
For revenge is a dish best served cold







Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-08-24 18:51:45]
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Re: Your Hatred is your Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 11:35:05 PM AEST
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Indeed, revenge is a dish best served cold. I probably shouldn't encourage this but I'd be a hypocryte not to, don't get mad: get revenge! Good to get it half way out of your system, the only thing left to do is finish the job. Well written.

~April


Re: Your Hatred is your Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 05:21:59 AM AEST
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revenge is a dish best served ice cold!!!! not that i'm encouraging it, but the last guy who was nasty to me got half of his hair shaved off when he passed out.... that was a good party! thoroughly enjoyed this post sue, once again, very honest!

2sdyx


Re: Your Hatred is your Weakness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 06:02:22 AM AEST
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Wow! Very impressive and powerful poem, Sue.




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