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Oh what a life
Contributed by
Thewix
on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 08:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What a life it would be one with only you and me I'll pick you up under a tree and we'll have a sandwich for free
a life we couldn't be sad could stay all day in bed where my favourite colour is red in which a mouse is a cat
we could live in a cave in which i keep you safe promise i'll behave i'll catch you on your wave
you and me together in our own fantasyland where fairytales are true which noone will understand
that squirrels can speak and wales can jump around that darkness is dark and silence is sound
oh what a life oh what a life oh what a life oh what a life
come in for a tea a duet for three candy for free or dance with a tree
Let's swim in the sea or talk to a bee I'm feeling free cause you are with me
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Thewix
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2006-08-24 08:39:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Oh what a life
(User Rating: 1 ) by 3660Days on
Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 05:01:52 AM AEST (User
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| the sing-song rhyme is distracting, but the abstract qualities are nice |
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