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Array ( [sid] => 124540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A FANTASY [time] => 2006-08-16 14:19:56 [hometext] => We all have fantasies [bodytext] =>
You have left, wont see you any more,
you left this morning, walked out the door,
you need not have gone, what did I do,
already I am missing you,

I sit and cry, im so alone,
I know your never coming home,
your were the one I was looking for,
now I sit and gaze, at the open door,

we could of travelled, to exotic places,
in my mind I had packed our cases,
why did it have to happen like this,
you never so much as blew me a kiss,

so tall and handsome such a wonderful face,
now my lifes in shatters, what a waste,
I yearned for your kisses, fell for your charms,
wanted to hold you in my arms,

imagined us making love,
underneath the stars above,
my life with you would of been much sweeter,
yet you only came, to read the gas meter. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 7 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

A FANTASY

Contributed by lillyjane on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

You have left, wont see you any more,
you left this morning, walked out the door,
you need not have gone, what did I do,
already I am missing you,

I sit and cry, im so alone,
I know your never coming home,
your were the one I was looking for,
now I sit and gaze, at the open door,

we could of travelled, to exotic places,
in my mind I had packed our cases,
why did it have to happen like this,
you never so much as blew me a kiss,

so tall and handsome such a wonderful face,
now my lifes in shatters, what a waste,
I yearned for your kisses, fell for your charms,
wanted to hold you in my arms,

imagined us making love,
underneath the stars above,
my life with you would of been much sweeter,
yet you only came, to read the gas meter.

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2006-08-16 14:19:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A FANTASY (User Rating: 1 )
by Autumns_kiss on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 04:54:57 PM AEST
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That's such a beautiful poem. i feel like i can relate to it so easily.

p.s. short people can be good looking too :p

Re: A FANTASY (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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Such a funny poem, I loved it!! P.S - I'm sure there are good looking short people but they don't appear in many fantasies!! Oops! I'm sure to be attacked for that comment!

Re: A FANTASY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:11:42 PM AEST
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lilly..this was HILARIOUS!! I was literally laughing
my silly butt off at the last line ... imagining you - face pressed
against the glass .. pining away for mister metre man .. ROFLMBO!!!

Excellent write.

~Breezy
(thinking I may have just overdosed on chocolate tonight! lol)

Re: A FANTASY (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 08:28:38 AM AEST
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This is sweet and flow well...I rather like this write..
God Bless!
C.S

Re: A FANTASY (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:19:02 AM AEST
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beautiful poem.......and yes, we all do have fantasies, but i found the less i do the happier i'll be so....lol. great write.

--talli

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