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Array ( [sid] => 124518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Phantom Rose [time] => 2006-08-16 00:37:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hauntingly red,
hues that of death.
Once it was blossomed,
but now of night
nothing seemed so less of life,
that as a hollow wind.

Tears have bled,
on the final breath,
that none could fathom.
That thought of everything alright,
seems so little trickling on a knife,
thoughts of nothing blend.

Life continues onto its sequel,
but not everything is so tranquil.
All that left behind,
becomes a horrid sublime.
From which only one thing grows,
the phantom rose. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lord_sogi [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Phantom Rose

Contributed by lord_sogi on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:37:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hauntingly red,
hues that of death.
Once it was blossomed,
but now of night
nothing seemed so less of life,
that as a hollow wind.

Tears have bled,
on the final breath,
that none could fathom.
That thought of everything alright,
seems so little trickling on a knife,
thoughts of nothing blend.

Life continues onto its sequel,
but not everything is so tranquil.
All that left behind,
becomes a horrid sublime.
From which only one thing grows,
the phantom rose.

Copyright © lord_sogi ... [ 2006-08-16 00:37:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:43:43 AM AEST
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Thats so lovely, brilliant write. xxx

Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:48:03 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write..
Beautifully done...
Blessings.
C.S

Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:56:55 AM AEST
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I love it. I had no idea that you were such a beautiful poet. Your stories are good but if all your poetry is like this then your poetry is better.

Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 02:06:06 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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another dark poem which is good
sometimes but i would love to see more of your talents in other types of poetry
this poem is good and i liked it too
just saying i know you have a briter side too

Re: Phantom Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by TeRrahiel on Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 10:14:16 AM AEST
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Only one word is suitable for commenting this poem: AWESOME!

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