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Array ( [sid] => 124408 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thought comes to mind [time] => 2006-08-13 12:10:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Thought comes to mind

Here we are seated
Amidst natural beauty
I can’t get my eyes off you

I can see two birds
Just like me and you
Nestling in joy
Perhaps counting their eggs

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The coming together of two souls
To create another little life

But do we want to bring that life in this wicked world
We will make sure it stays away from all the evils
Changing
That is bad for a better tomorrow

A group of ducks float
In aspiration to reach the other side of the pond

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The urge to be the best
If at first you fail
Then you spend the rest in hope
In hope that you will beat the best

The eagle in the sky casts its wicked eye over the young chickens
The hen spreads its wings over its little ones
Until the eagle disappears

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The will to love your offspring
And the wicked people who lead
Lead your children to Drugs
For their gain
At the end it’s just your loss

I’m out now
Of my bubble
I respect those who respect themselves

I’m still staring at your eyes
Just in case this moment never comes back

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crazyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
thought comes to mind

Contributed by crazyn on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Thought comes to mind

Here we are seated
Amidst natural beauty
I can’t get my eyes off you

I can see two birds
Just like me and you
Nestling in joy
Perhaps counting their eggs

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The coming together of two souls
To create another little life

But do we want to bring that life in this wicked world
We will make sure it stays away from all the evils
Changing
That is bad for a better tomorrow

A group of ducks float
In aspiration to reach the other side of the pond

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The urge to be the best
If at first you fail
Then you spend the rest in hope
In hope that you will beat the best

The eagle in the sky casts its wicked eye over the young chickens
The hen spreads its wings over its little ones
Until the eagle disappears

Thought comes to mind
That’s life
The will to love your offspring
And the wicked people who lead
Lead your children to Drugs
For their gain
At the end it’s just your loss

I’m out now
Of my bubble
I respect those who respect themselves

I’m still staring at your eyes
Just in case this moment never comes back





Copyright © crazyn ... [ 2006-08-13 12:10:05]
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Re: thought comes to mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Saloni on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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i love this poem! it has so much nature and beauty expressing how u feel.. its just too goood!! i love u baby xX


Re: thought comes to mind (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:27:00 PM AEST
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i like the parallels to nature and love...nice job.


Re: thought comes to mind (User Rating: 1 )
by zeppchic420 on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:20:15 PM AEST
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nice imagery


Re: thought comes to mind (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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very nice!!

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