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Array ( [sid] => 124277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blank Wall [time] => 2006-08-09 21:35:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I see before me a blank wall
What does this mean?
Why should I care?

The wall seems to never end
There is no joy on this never ending wall
All it is is a hard, cold display of NOTHING.

My insides cringe and shrivel
I try to look away but all I see is the wall
It holds my soul in it's vast blankness.

I keep looking hoping to see something
A glimpse of hope, or maybe joy
Maybe deep inside there is some life.

But there is nothing
Nothing to be stirred by tears or laughter
No fire could warm the coldness.

I turn off the sink faucet and
turn of the light; turning away from the wall
Till tomorrow when I face it in my refelction. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Iesha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Blank Wall

Contributed by Iesha on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 09:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I see before me a blank wall
What does this mean?
Why should I care?

The wall seems to never end
There is no joy on this never ending wall
All it is is a hard, cold display of NOTHING.

My insides cringe and shrivel
I try to look away but all I see is the wall
It holds my soul in it's vast blankness.

I keep looking hoping to see something
A glimpse of hope, or maybe joy
Maybe deep inside there is some life.

But there is nothing
Nothing to be stirred by tears or laughter
No fire could warm the coldness.

I turn off the sink faucet and
turn of the light; turning away from the wall
Till tomorrow when I face it in my refelction.

Copyright © Iesha ... [ 2006-08-09 21:35:48]
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Re: The Blank Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST
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i like the walls meaning...the inside of you...very good...i enjoyed it..

Re: The Blank Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:37:23 PM AEST
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Nice personification

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