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i'll die just like i know i should
with a broken heart and weary eyes
these tears were never worth the fight

this time i won't be caught
this time i won't survive
this time i will make it work
this time is my suicide

im gonna draw a picture with a twist
i'll draw it with a razorblade
i'll draw it on my wrist
as i draw this picture, a fountain will appear
as this fountains flows... my problems will disappear

as my thoughts begin to fade
and darkness begins to creep,
a tear falls... the last time i'll ever weep

Hurt.cut.cry
you burned me... left me to die
slit.blood.scream
you left me dead... just like you dreamed
sirens.lights.fire
now im dead, left for desire [comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 13 [informant] => HeArTbRoKEnGiRl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

the last time i'll ever weep

Contributed by HeArTbRoKEnGiRl on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 08:06:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Now i lay me down for good
i'll die just like i know i should
with a broken heart and weary eyes
these tears were never worth the fight

this time i won't be caught
this time i won't survive
this time i will make it work
this time is my suicide

im gonna draw a picture with a twist
i'll draw it with a razorblade
i'll draw it on my wrist
as i draw this picture, a fountain will appear
as this fountains flows... my problems will disappear

as my thoughts begin to fade
and darkness begins to creep,
a tear falls... the last time i'll ever weep

Hurt.cut.cry
you burned me... left me to die
slit.blood.scream
you left me dead... just like you dreamed
sirens.lights.fire
now im dead, left for desire

Copyright © HeArTbRoKEnGiRl ... [ 2006-07-31 20:06:39]
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Re: the last time i'll ever weep (User Rating: 1 )
by luckedout on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 08:26:31 PM AEST
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everything passes with time, keep on writing keep yourself going =]

Re: the last time i'll ever weep (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 08:57:40 PM AEST
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That is such a sad poem. Well written, but sad.
It's true, everything passes with time. But once you love someone they will always be apart of you. Eventually the pain will fade.
Good write.
Keep it up.
Luvs ya!
Jess : )

Re: the last time i'll ever weep (User Rating: 1 )
by lostindesire on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 08:58:22 PM AEST
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we have all excpeirenced heartbreak and it does feel like the end of the world. but things get better. great writing

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