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[title] => Haunted
[time] => 2006-07-25 11:57:39
[hometext] => written after waking from a recurring dream of a 25 year love lost...
[bodytext] => I wake in the morning. Haunted by your face, and I wonder how we came to this place. Where time and space are all that remains. And I wonder why this thing that never can be , just wont die and set me free. Too many times I awake with a start. hearing your voice so softly in my ear, then I remember that for so long we have been apart. On those days the sobs choke me, And I can't help but cry. My memeories haunt me as days and nights go by. When will this spirit ever rest? Why do you haunt me so??? written Dec.2005
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Haunted
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kttykttywfreckls
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Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 11:57:39 AM in AEST
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I wake in the morning. Haunted by your face, and I wonder how we came to this place. Where time and space are all that remains. And I wonder why this thing that never can be , just wont die and set me free. Too many times I awake with a start. hearing your voice so softly in my ear, then I remember that for so long we have been apart. On those days the sobs choke me, And I can't help but cry. My memeories haunt me as days and nights go by. When will this spirit ever rest? Why do you haunt me so??? written Dec.2005
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Re: Haunted
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 04:54:32 PM AEST
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wow very intense and deeply sad. it was very well written though, the pain and the anguish really came out and kind of spraled the poem to life although i do feel that it ends in mid thought...i dont like there should be one more line or somehting?
i still enjoyed it very much so, though.
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Re: Haunted
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 02:33:17 AM AEST
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This is such a powerful write it shows your pain and anguish that you are feeling. To have something that can haunt you for so long must have been a horrifying experience that you had to deal with. I am saddened by this. I wish you well and the best in your attempts to overcome this.
sadaddy
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Re: Haunted
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 07:12:40 PM AEST
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Very sad and anguished ... mornings always seem to be
the most difficult .. you wake from (hopefully) rested
sleep, only to be tortured by mind's thought again ..
A lot of emotion in here .. I relate and feel your pain;
I hope you have better days soon ..
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Haunted
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by JGB on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:19:45 PM AEST
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I don't think I've ever felt like this. This is a great write. Yes, I have been Haunted, but not by a love that wouldn't go away.
Sorry and good luck.
Great write, different and sadly beautiful!
Joanna
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