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Array ( [sid] => 123375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Will You Say When I'm Walking Out The Door? [time] => 2006-07-18 15:35:30 [hometext] => wrote this on vacation stuck in a house with awful people that treat me like a doormat [bodytext] => You say I'm a walking black cloud
You tell me things I know aren't true
You say I hate everyone close to me
The only one I hate is you

If you keep tuneing out the words I say
No matter how it comes out: curse or none
We were supposed to be happily close
The only feeling I get is shunned

You must be bleeding beneath your smile
To take this out on me
You should've listened to the words I said
Your too deaf to hear, too dark to see

Just take me for who I am or leave it
Take my heart 'cause it's tired of bleedn'
But when you walk out the door:
Don't look back, no, don't look back

The same dependance on everyone around you
Why can't I have a shoulder to cry on?
Shouldn't we share long talks?
We are supposed to be close or get along

You say I'm the only problem, why am I so sad?
You tell me to grow up like I've told you before
But you only hear yourself talking
Living with you was never fun, its been a chore

Deprivation of a sister is carbon monoxide to oxygen
No one prefers that, but its the only way I know
It is days without eating or sleeping
But it seems the only way to go

Take my love but you can leave it
Keep our memories I won't need them
Just when I walk out the door
I won't look back and I won't come back



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What Will You Say When I'm Walking Out The Door?

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:35:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You say I'm a walking black cloud
You tell me things I know aren't true
You say I hate everyone close to me
The only one I hate is you

If you keep tuneing out the words I say
No matter how it comes out: curse or none
We were supposed to be happily close
The only feeling I get is shunned

You must be bleeding beneath your smile
To take this out on me
You should've listened to the words I said
Your too deaf to hear, too dark to see

Just take me for who I am or leave it
Take my heart 'cause it's tired of bleedn'
But when you walk out the door:
Don't look back, no, don't look back

The same dependance on everyone around you
Why can't I have a shoulder to cry on?
Shouldn't we share long talks?
We are supposed to be close or get along

You say I'm the only problem, why am I so sad?
You tell me to grow up like I've told you before
But you only hear yourself talking
Living with you was never fun, its been a chore

Deprivation of a sister is carbon monoxide to oxygen
No one prefers that, but its the only way I know
It is days without eating or sleeping
But it seems the only way to go

Take my love but you can leave it
Keep our memories I won't need them
Just when I walk out the door
I won't look back and I won't come back







Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-07-18 15:35:30]
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Re: What Will You Say When I'm Walking Out The Door? (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:26:47 AM AEST
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simply awesome, the words, the rhythm, i can't see why nobody commented before. that's some talent you have for putting anything into words...



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