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Array ( [sid] => 123373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Death Of The Pain [time] => 2006-07-18 15:20:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I would rather feel nothing
Than this pain I endure
The torture of my soul
The destruction of a heart so pure

So I hold the glistening metal
To drain it all away
I barely feel...just slight relief
My spirit has decayed

Don't fear for me
Don't lose sleep
And at my funeral,
I beg you not to weep

The pain is gone
I cannot feel
Six feet under
Cause the hurting was so real

Remember me
But do not cry
Life wasn't worth living
Thus, I shall die [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lilbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Death Of The Pain

Contributed by lilbabe on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I would rather feel nothing
Than this pain I endure
The torture of my soul
The destruction of a heart so pure

So I hold the glistening metal
To drain it all away
I barely feel...just slight relief
My spirit has decayed

Don't fear for me
Don't lose sleep
And at my funeral,
I beg you not to weep

The pain is gone
I cannot feel
Six feet under
Cause the hurting was so real

Remember me
But do not cry
Life wasn't worth living
Thus, I shall die

Copyright © lilbabe ... [ 2006-07-18 15:20:11]
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Re: The Death Of The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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When I read this poem I sensed that u are really hurting on the inside and if u believe in god he tells us that he won't put more on us than we can bare. So when u are hurt or feeling down just pray because god always makes a way. This poem was very deep and the emotion of this poem makes u hooked 2 it. Keep up the good work. Very well written.-luckycharm

Re: The Death Of The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 06:43:25 AM AEST
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oooh, dark, fantastically written, totally feel the pain and can relate, absolutely loved it.

~natalya

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