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Array ( [sid] => 123148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => and i became yours. [time] => 2006-07-13 23:04:51 [hometext] => Poem about the night i gave my heart away. Nine months ago from today. [bodytext] => I still can remember,
that very chilly night.
Football players on the field,
Giving the opponents quite a fight.

Hanging out with our friends,
doing stupid and crazy things.
What simple happiness,
True friends seem to bring.

I never thought it would happen,
me falling head over heels.
I've been hurt so much before,
I've forgotten how this feels.

You asked for my heart,
And i carefully gave it to you.
That broken heart i used to have,
Feels simply brand new.

From that night,
A felt a change that went through me.
A change of less sorrow, less sadness
And simply enough light to see.

We've been through a lot,
Mostly good, but bad as well.
And we're still together,
Still loving one another.

I am your girl,
you are my boy.
And you girl's heart,
is full with joy.

Thanks to you,
she is strong.
And has the confidence,
To overcome the wrong.

I love you so much,
Here's this poem, Enjoy!
Because all i can really say is,
Thanks for loving me boy! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 2 [informant] => -xhaleyx- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
and i became yours.

Contributed by -xhaleyx- on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I still can remember,
that very chilly night.
Football players on the field,
Giving the opponents quite a fight.

Hanging out with our friends,
doing stupid and crazy things.
What simple happiness,
True friends seem to bring.

I never thought it would happen,
me falling head over heels.
I've been hurt so much before,
I've forgotten how this feels.

You asked for my heart,
And i carefully gave it to you.
That broken heart i used to have,
Feels simply brand new.

From that night,
A felt a change that went through me.
A change of less sorrow, less sadness
And simply enough light to see.

We've been through a lot,
Mostly good, but bad as well.
And we're still together,
Still loving one another.

I am your girl,
you are my boy.
And you girl's heart,
is full with joy.

Thanks to you,
she is strong.
And has the confidence,
To overcome the wrong.

I love you so much,
Here's this poem, Enjoy!
Because all i can really say is,
Thanks for loving me boy!




Copyright © -xhaleyx- ... [ 2006-07-13 23:04:51]
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Re: and i became yours. (User Rating: 1 )
by MrPerfect on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:09:09 PM AEST
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great poem Haleyfer (this message approved from Your brother from another mother)

Cody/MrPerfect


Re: and i became yours. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:50:40 PM AEST
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Nice, happy story. Very cute.


Re: and i became yours. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 03:17:06 PM AEST
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Very nicely and simply put...
All the best to you both...
Jenni


Re: and i became yours. (User Rating: 1 )
by HrMajestyUK on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 05:37:55 PM AEST
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this brought a smile to my face. It's nice to remember what that feeling was like... good luck to you both.




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