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Array ( [sid] => 123062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hit The Hex [time] => 2006-07-12 11:33:06 [hometext] => I am flawed, but I'm cleaning up so well.... No real flow to this one as I made it up whilst typing it in. It's just about how life can get better at the end a long relationship I guess. [bodytext] => Hit the Hex on Monday,
Making monstrous shapes,
It was great,
Stomping with my mates,
There's no wait,
No need to denigrate,
Drinking up till late, that's our fate,
In a state, on a plate.
Songs I used to hate, so irate,
Have a way of making dates.

Loving life, it's better, then before,
No longer dreading what's in store.
I wrote in that letter, about the whore,
Now my heart is never aching anymore.
Found a brand new lover, opens doors,
Oh my heart, never seen the light of day before.
No longer undercover, feeling raw, heart's not poor,
Just dripping passion and profusion as a law. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 54 [informant] => alasdaircairns [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Hit The Hex

Contributed by alasdaircairns on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 11:33:06 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Hit the Hex on Monday,
Making monstrous shapes,
It was great,
Stomping with my mates,
There's no wait,
No need to denigrate,
Drinking up till late, that's our fate,
In a state, on a plate.
Songs I used to hate, so irate,
Have a way of making dates.

Loving life, it's better, then before,
No longer dreading what's in store.
I wrote in that letter, about the whore,
Now my heart is never aching anymore.
Found a brand new lover, opens doors,
Oh my heart, never seen the light of day before.
No longer undercover, feeling raw, heart's not poor,
Just dripping passion and profusion as a law.

Copyright © alasdaircairns ... [ 2006-07-12 11:33:06]
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Re: Hit The Hex (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:21:50 PM AEST
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Glad you are feeling better, you have to be strong, I am still trying to get there.. brilliant poem xxx

Re: Hit The Hex (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:34:05 PM AEST
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Luckily for me, I stumbled upon a girl who is deeper, funnier, better looking and more enriched than than the girl I wasted 7 years with. If there's hope for lil ole me, there's hope for everyone!! Thanks for readiing it though-it's probably one of my worst poems ever but I was trying to waste time instead of hanging up my washing and making my friend a birthday card! x

Re: Hit The Hex (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 01:02:48 PM AEST
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Very unique and different.
refreshing really.

Jeff

Re: Hit The Hex (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 09:02:47 AM AEST
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Don't know u but it's always good to hear(or read)that someone is moving on with their life. You've only got the one so why not be happy when you can. Hope you put the washing out too

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