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Being with you has opened my eyes.
One day there will be an end to this misery and lies.

He doesn’t appreciate me.
He disappoints me.
He doesn’t love me unconditionally.
He doesn’t view me as his fantasy.
Throughout the night, he stays mad at me.
He cherishes every woman expect me.
He has proven that he has no loyalty.

I’ve tried to hurt you through spike.
And I never tell you what I do.
Cause I’m afraid of losing you.

Break up that’s what we should do.
Sometimes I wish I could just shoot you.
We are not right for each other.
One of us should say the words.
We are though and I’m better off without you.

You make me unhappy.
You cheat on me constantly.
Everything that I’ve said is true.
But for some reason I continue to stay with you.
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Deserving

Contributed by Nelly0441 on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 02:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I’ve come to the realization that I am better than you.
Being with you has opened my eyes.
One day there will be an end to this misery and lies.

He doesn’t appreciate me.
He disappoints me.
He doesn’t love me unconditionally.
He doesn’t view me as his fantasy.
Throughout the night, he stays mad at me.
He cherishes every woman expect me.
He has proven that he has no loyalty.

I’ve tried to hurt you through spike.
And I never tell you what I do.
Cause I’m afraid of losing you.

Break up that’s what we should do.
Sometimes I wish I could just shoot you.
We are not right for each other.
One of us should say the words.
We are though and I’m better off without you.

You make me unhappy.
You cheat on me constantly.
Everything that I’ve said is true.
But for some reason I continue to stay with you.

Copyright Â© Nelly0441 ... [ 2006-07-05 14:20:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deserving (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:20:21 PM AEST
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So very sad and something in the past I understood well. Yet I detect your strong and know what you want so go for it and be rid of the butthead! He doesnt deserve you.

PS ( though you may feel like shooting him, he isnt worth it !)

Michelle

Re: Deserving (User Rating: 1 )
by Nelly0441 on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 02:33:09 PM AEST
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Thanks Michelle. I am in the process of currently doing just that.

Re: Deserving (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:57:43 PM AEST
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Time for someone to sit down, and truly READ the wrdz they have written. Let them soak in, and face what reality has to say as well. Thank you for sharing this, and good luck to you. wrdz

Re: Deserving (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 11:51:56 PM AEST
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The title says it all....You deserve the highest quality of love. Don't stop until you find it.

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