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Array ( [sid] => 122762 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Love [time] => 2006-07-05 04:34:17 [hometext] => YOU NEVER FORGET YOUR FIRST LOVE ... OR DO YOU??? THIS IS TRUE. [bodytext] => You were my first love, my handsome blond boy,
just a glimpse of your face, made my heart skip with joy,
you walked me to school, waited at the school gate,
we held hands in the park on our first date,

I was besotted by you, all day would I dream,
thoughts of you filled my mind, I was only thirteen,
you wrote me love letters, still have them now,
we would marry one day, that was my vow,

As time went by, we drifted apart,
I cried and I cried, it broke my heart,
as the years went by, still thought of you,
wondered aswell if you thought of me to,

Last week in a club, my friend said to me,
there is your first love, I said where I cant see??
then I felt my legs turning to jelly,
there stood a bald man, with a huge boozers belly,

I would not of gone out, if only I knew,
all the memories I had would be shattered by you,
The memories I had of you giving me flowers,
were replaced by a fat man, in Rupert Bear trousers... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

First Love

Contributed by lillyjane on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:34:17 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You were my first love, my handsome blond boy,
just a glimpse of your face, made my heart skip with joy,
you walked me to school, waited at the school gate,
we held hands in the park on our first date,

I was besotted by you, all day would I dream,
thoughts of you filled my mind, I was only thirteen,
you wrote me love letters, still have them now,
we would marry one day, that was my vow,

As time went by, we drifted apart,
I cried and I cried, it broke my heart,
as the years went by, still thought of you,
wondered aswell if you thought of me to,

Last week in a club, my friend said to me,
there is your first love, I said where I cant see??
then I felt my legs turning to jelly,
there stood a bald man, with a huge boozers belly,

I would not of gone out, if only I knew,
all the memories I had would be shattered by you,
The memories I had of you giving me flowers,
were replaced by a fat man, in Rupert Bear trousers...

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2006-07-05 04:34:17]
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Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 05:14:12 AM AEST
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That's about how it goes.
Luved this.
big huggs, mucho smiles,
emy

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 06:02:50 AM AEST
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LillyJane~
I think we never forget our first love, but in some cases we would rather leave them in our past where they belong. It's funny how something, a certain smell etc...can trigger our memory. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing it with us~
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:03:23 PM AEST
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Oh this is so good. My first love wasn't bad in looks when I met him again, but he was too fond of drink for my liking. Sad but true he was my dream man. Loved the poem. Sue x

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:51:03 PM AEST
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lol.. oh no!
well, I'm sorry to hear that - I'm sure you were expecting to find the sight of him, a bit kinder on the eyes.. yes?
..so goes it my friend-

great post~

B.

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:53:55 PM AEST
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Now see where you're coming from lillyjane!!! And you're in the same timezone. Love the Rupert trousers bit-Ace!

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:50:58 AM AEST
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hahaha, so funny, hope that dont happen to me when I grow up. hugs,
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by epsftbllchic1617 on Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 09:34:58 PM AEST
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Haha, everyones nightmere of a first love. Way to make a tough topic lighthearted.

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:19:04 AM AEST
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'The memories I had of you giving me flowers,
Were replaced by a fat man in Rupert Bear trousers'
Oh dear Lilly(Den laughs)...Some memories are destined to be shattered and I reckon the fashion-sense had more to do with that than the overweight?Thank you,big smiles here,

Den

Re: First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 08:43:04 PM AEST
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Some things are better left as memories. I was just thinking about an old boyfriend of mine and how we drifted apart and how I'd like to see him again, but then again maybe it's better to leave him where he belongs, untainted in my memories.

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