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Array ( [sid] => 122610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crimson Decent [time] => 2006-07-01 16:01:03 [hometext] => After the first time... you have to go deeper to sustain the anguish. ((My D.e.s.c.e.n.t)) [bodytext] => The

Xx. S c a r r e d .xX soul


Of an unwanted memory
Murdered innocence still decaying
Like a (non)perfect love in the parched
Veins of a dying fetus


And can you still say I am

(((b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l)))

With my agony revoltingly displayed
On the canvas of my infected flesh?




This
Sadness
Is
Toxic


Like /f/o/r/b/i/d/d/e/n ~kisses~

It s_p_r_e_a_d_s like the damnable disease that you are,
Like nucleic-acid parasites
D e v o u r i n g
With insatiable hunger the fragment of self-control

I don’t have.



| . Release . |
from the

shackles
0 0
o o
0 0

of association



eyes glazed over with delicious numbness
sweet like the sigh of metal caressing skin
tender as a rose’s bosom, and just as red



I’m left abandoned in the jagged embrace of Desolation,
Drowning in the dense forests of Misery’s hair,
Painting my pain with a rusty safety pin,
Seven deliberate castrations in hopes,
Of striking the mother artery…

redemption



VvVvVvVvVvVvVvV
Virgin to the world of divine mutilation
Hands tremulous and unsure of which wrist
To obliterate first
And how much is too much…
VvVvVvVvVvVvVvV



Burrowing deep with twisted determination
{{T..w..i..t..c..h..i..n..g}} smile deforming my chapped lips
Sharp beatings of anguish making me forget the one that
Sleeps in the + tomb + of my soul


Digging further into the anatomy of my sorrow
Floor bathing in my crimson sacrifice
Death wrapping his hands lovingly
Around my charcoal heart




I welcome him with another 4-centimeter incision
Laughing as the blade finds its way to the other side
Shrieking with maniacal glee as all succumbs to Darkness






D E E P E R !!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 75 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Crimson Decent

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 04:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



The

Xx. S c a r r e d .xX soul


Of an unwanted memory
Murdered innocence still decaying
Like a (non)perfect love in the parched
Veins of a dying fetus


And can you still say I am

(((b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l)))

With my agony revoltingly displayed
On the canvas of my infected flesh?




This
Sadness
Is
Toxic


Like /f/o/r/b/i/d/d/e/n ~kisses~

It s_p_r_e_a_d_s like the damnable disease that you are,
Like nucleic-acid parasites
D e v o u r i n g
With insatiable hunger the fragment of self-control

I don’t have.



| . Release . |
from the

shackles
0 0
o o
0 0

of association



eyes glazed over with delicious numbness
sweet like the sigh of metal caressing skin
tender as a rose’s bosom, and just as red



I’m left abandoned in the jagged embrace of Desolation,
Drowning in the dense forests of Misery’s hair,
Painting my pain with a rusty safety pin,
Seven deliberate castrations in hopes,
Of striking the mother artery…

redemption



VvVvVvVvVvVvVvV
Virgin to the world of divine mutilation
Hands tremulous and unsure of which wrist
To obliterate first
And how much is too much…
VvVvVvVvVvVvVvV



Burrowing deep with twisted determination
{{T..w..i..t..c..h..i..n..g}} smile deforming my chapped lips
Sharp beatings of anguish making me forget the one that
Sleeps in the + tomb + of my soul


Digging further into the anatomy of my sorrow
Floor bathing in my crimson sacrifice
Death wrapping his hands lovingly
Around my charcoal heart




I welcome him with another 4-centimeter incision
Laughing as the blade finds its way to the other side
Shrieking with maniacal glee as all succumbs to Darkness






D E E P E R !!





Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2006-07-01 16:01:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Crimson Decent (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:04:57 PM AEST
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I was looking over your titles and saw one which pulled me in entitled ravenous. After that I decided to read your latest and I'm engulfed by your decriptions. There must indeed be something ravenous inside you because I've never before read a poem which tore into my mind the way that yours did. You are nothing less than intensely provoctive and brilliant . Your words are enthralling.
your fellow poet , doug




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