Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 21:58:35 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !
  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback
  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 122247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emptiness [time] => 2006-06-24 19:27:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

  

  



I wrote down my thoughts
I leave them on my dresser
but also in my heart
waiting for you to return

Words won't explain
and actions cannot express
The feelings of emptiness
and complete heartache

You make me feel invisible
And as though I am not there
It is only when you need something
that you truely seem to care

I spill my heart
And my thoughts
I bleed from the inside
and I leak from my eyes

I would rather die
Than live without you
But I can't die, not yet
Because I know there is more

There is more between you and me
The end is still far
Because I love you
And that is something that lasts forever [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 24 [informant] => xxTiaxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Emptiness

Contributed by xxTiaxx on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 07:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered





  

  



I wrote down my thoughts
I leave them on my dresser
but also in my heart
waiting for you to return

Words won't explain
and actions cannot express
The feelings of emptiness
and complete heartache

You make me feel invisible
And as though I am not there
It is only when you need something
that you truely seem to care

I spill my heart
And my thoughts
I bleed from the inside
and I leak from my eyes

I would rather die
Than live without you
But I can't die, not yet
Because I know there is more

There is more between you and me
The end is still far
Because I love you
And that is something that lasts forever



Copyright © xxTiaxx ... [ 2006-06-24 19:27:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:



Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Emptiness (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 12:04:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i like this stanza>>>> I spill my heart
And my thoughts
I bleed from the inside
and I leak from my eyes

good job tia, good luck moving on or fixing things




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com