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Array ( [sid] => 121912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Him And Her [time] => 2006-06-17 21:41:50 [hometext] => Simply about one of the most amazing people to enter my life. [bodytext] => She finds comfort in only two places
Talking to God, and in the arms of her's truley.
A girl who keeps most of it inside
and tells no one for the sake of their feelings
She cant tell him
She doesnt want ot upset him
Worry him, or hurt him
because she doesnt want to lose him.
This boy means so much to her,
She doubts he even knows
She wants to tell him how she feels,
But she's afriad he'll freeze up, or wont feel the same way.
As he hugs her, all of her problems are gone.
His smile, makes her smile
She wants more then anything is for him to love her as she loves him.
She thinks about him all the time
and dreams of him everynight.
she loves him more then he could ever know.
She waits for him to get sad, that we she can comfort him.
She fears that he will get hurt, and she wont be there to help him.
He says he loves her, but rarley acts like it.
She waits for him to make a move, but cares so much
she waits patiently.
She prays for him everynight
that if he has a problem, God will help him.
He is the world to her, and she knows he doesnt know.
She doesnt let people talk bad about him,
and she wont let them change her mind about him.
She loves him, and thats it.
The sound of his voice is enough for her to relax to
Just like a song she would fall in love with.
She looks deep into his eyes as he talks,
She looks into his eyes, and cant help but admire them.
A beautiful shade of blue, goes with him perfectly.
As he holds her hand, she can feel his heartbeat.
He squeezes her hand to remind her, hes there
She squeezes his hand back, and wishes to never let go of it.
When he hugs her, she finds it life threatning to let go.
But just before it happens, she can feel his pressure against her.
A slight squeeze, then she feels his arm slowly slide off.
To her, letting go is the worst feeling ever.
Like the sun setting, but never rising again.
As she says goodbye,
She wonders if thats the last time she will speak to him.
She loves being with him,
and loves talking to him about anything.
She hides when she is upset.
For she knows that when she is upset, it upsets him.
She wonders as he reads this, what he is thinking.
Whether he feels the tottal opposite
or exactly the same.
Whatever it is, nothing can make her feel different.
She hopes for his love back.
because she cares for him, more then he could ever imagine.
If anyone could take this feeling from her,
She would be loveless, and heartless.
She knows that no one can take this feeling away,
except for "him" himself.
Only he holds the power to take this feeling away.
the only question is...
Would he ever.....? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 2 [informant] => -xhaleyx- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Him And Her

Contributed by -xhaleyx- on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She finds comfort in only two places
Talking to God, and in the arms of her's truley.
A girl who keeps most of it inside
and tells no one for the sake of their feelings
She cant tell him
She doesnt want ot upset him
Worry him, or hurt him
because she doesnt want to lose him.
This boy means so much to her,
She doubts he even knows
She wants to tell him how she feels,
But she's afriad he'll freeze up, or wont feel the same way.
As he hugs her, all of her problems are gone.
His smile, makes her smile
She wants more then anything is for him to love her as she loves him.
She thinks about him all the time
and dreams of him everynight.
she loves him more then he could ever know.
She waits for him to get sad, that we she can comfort him.
She fears that he will get hurt, and she wont be there to help him.
He says he loves her, but rarley acts like it.
She waits for him to make a move, but cares so much
she waits patiently.
She prays for him everynight
that if he has a problem, God will help him.
He is the world to her, and she knows he doesnt know.
She doesnt let people talk bad about him,
and she wont let them change her mind about him.
She loves him, and thats it.
The sound of his voice is enough for her to relax to
Just like a song she would fall in love with.
She looks deep into his eyes as he talks,
She looks into his eyes, and cant help but admire them.
A beautiful shade of blue, goes with him perfectly.
As he holds her hand, she can feel his heartbeat.
He squeezes her hand to remind her, hes there
She squeezes his hand back, and wishes to never let go of it.
When he hugs her, she finds it life threatning to let go.
But just before it happens, she can feel his pressure against her.
A slight squeeze, then she feels his arm slowly slide off.
To her, letting go is the worst feeling ever.
Like the sun setting, but never rising again.
As she says goodbye,
She wonders if thats the last time she will speak to him.
She loves being with him,
and loves talking to him about anything.
She hides when she is upset.
For she knows that when she is upset, it upsets him.
She wonders as he reads this, what he is thinking.
Whether he feels the tottal opposite
or exactly the same.
Whatever it is, nothing can make her feel different.
She hopes for his love back.
because she cares for him, more then he could ever imagine.
If anyone could take this feeling from her,
She would be loveless, and heartless.
She knows that no one can take this feeling away,
except for "him" himself.
Only he holds the power to take this feeling away.
the only question is...
Would he ever.....?

Copyright © -xhaleyx- ... [ 2006-06-17 21:41:50]
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Re: Him And Her (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 11:55:59 PM AEST
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very nicely done!

wiz

Re: Him And Her (User Rating: 1 )
by franciswolf on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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That'd work a tear out of my eye if it were for me

Re: Him And Her (User Rating: 1 )
by MrPerfect on Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:21:47 PM AEST
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nice you can really feel your emotions haleyfer

Cody/MrPerfect

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