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Array ( [sid] => 121897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emy Comes To The Rescue [time] => 2006-06-17 05:31:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I look out the window
thinking in silence of many things
things like
should I stay or should i go,
we walk we talk we breathe
we dance and sing
we all have dreams
but what we need
no one ever really knows.

This world moves so fast
whenever I pause
to comptemplate
the chaos takes control
and I get spun round and round,
I walk In a straight line
as mixed emotions
cut me deep inside
the sun is shinning bright
but I am down.

It's so hard to breathe
I self analyze myself
and I don't like
what I am seeing
but I know
when I need something to believe
I see a star shinning
and I can feel
there is a reason for living
and I flow
like a warm breeze
and I know I been saved again
emy comes to the rescue. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 329 [topic] => 48 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Emy Comes To The Rescue

Contributed by secretwind on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 05:31:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I look out the window
thinking in silence of many things
things like
should I stay or should i go,
we walk we talk we breathe
we dance and sing
we all have dreams
but what we need
no one ever really knows.

This world moves so fast
whenever I pause
to comptemplate
the chaos takes control
and I get spun round and round,
I walk In a straight line
as mixed emotions
cut me deep inside
the sun is shinning bright
but I am down.

It's so hard to breathe
I self analyze myself
and I don't like
what I am seeing
but I know
when I need something to believe
I see a star shinning
and I can feel
there is a reason for living
and I flow
like a warm breeze
and I know I been saved again
emy comes to the rescue.



Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-06-17 05:31:28]
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Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:26:44 AM AEST
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beautiful write thanks for sharing


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:50:02 AM AEST
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very nice flow there and deep too
great write

VAMP


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 06:02:57 PM AEST
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emotional write for you... but it would help if i knew the story behind "emy." i enjoyed this poem over all
♥chey


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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Nicely written.
unique in its own ways
and yet the same
things inside me
are written down
by you.


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:19:21 PM AEST
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Wow!!
what an awesome way to start my day.
The resque thingy works both was my dear sweet friend.
Gosh I'm just overwhelmed with this very encouraging, rockin write.
u always know how to get this star dazzling.
I;m very seldom at a loss for words but right now, I'm speechless.
luvu mucho, friend.
luv, huggs, big ole heart smiles,
emy


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 09:21:59 AM AEST
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Friendship and love are simply gaining strength and giving strength to each other. I think (there I go thinking again) "like a warm breeze" some strength was given and gained in this poem. Good work.

KenMoore


Re: Emy Comes To The Rescue (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 10:15:36 AM AEST
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To have a dear friend that will truly LISTEN when you need a LISTENER to be near, is so like Emy!
She's a bright star to all need!
Beautifully written thoughts about friendship without greed!
Warm love
consue




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