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Array ( [sid] => 121885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once upon a dream [time] => 2006-06-17 00:51:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Long ago there you were,
living happily with her.
She made you dream
she made you believe,
of a story you never wanted to leave.
Long ago there she was,
standing by his side.
Loving him with all her might,
dancing with the stars at night.
Long ago they were one,
running towards a new life.
But she fell, and slipped away from his hands
something he just couldn't understand.
She no longer could explain,
what made her float away.
Once upon a dream,
is all it was.
She knew he was all she needed
but she knew she would wake up,
to her lonely life and realize
his love she didn't deserve.
Once upon a dream,
she let him go.
It hurt her to know she caused him pain,
but the love for him still remains.
She knows that in time,
he'll find someone new,
who will love him too...
and that day he will have to let me go. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 14 [informant] => bluestars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Once upon a dream

Contributed by bluestars on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 12:51:33 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Long ago there you were,
living happily with her.
She made you dream
she made you believe,
of a story you never wanted to leave.
Long ago there she was,
standing by his side.
Loving him with all her might,
dancing with the stars at night.
Long ago they were one,
running towards a new life.
But she fell, and slipped away from his hands
something he just couldn't understand.
She no longer could explain,
what made her float away.
Once upon a dream,
is all it was.
She knew he was all she needed
but she knew she would wake up,
to her lonely life and realize
his love she didn't deserve.
Once upon a dream,
she let him go.
It hurt her to know she caused him pain,
but the love for him still remains.
She knows that in time,
he'll find someone new,
who will love him too...
and that day he will have to let me go.

Copyright © bluestars ... [ 2006-06-17 00:51:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Once upon a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 03:16:34 AM AEST
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Awesomely written.
Hang tuff.
Great work.
huggs,
emy

Re: Once upon a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:44:20 AM AEST
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nicely written i enjoyed reading

Re: Once upon a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by wolf_tamer on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this very expressive write.
~wolf~

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