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These days I feel like a newcomer into this town
You make me smile when I am sad
Now a person blackmailing me makes me mad
You make my spirit rise when you are around
I felt on top of the world and now I have hit the ground

I actually fell for it when you said I love you
Now I realize all of them where untrue
You made me feel special and unique
Now I am feeling sadder each week
I liked it better when she was not around
Now I would rather drown

I actually thought you were my friends
You were once good to me but now
You have changed
My passing has been arranged

I use to like spending time with you
These days I find it hard to speak with you
The hugs we share use to make me smile
These days my life isn’t worthwhile
Without you I am worthless
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Worthless to you

Contributed by Franko_1991 on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



You pick me up when I am down
These days I feel like a newcomer into this town
You make me smile when I am sad
Now a person blackmailing me makes me mad
You make my spirit rise when you are around
I felt on top of the world and now I have hit the ground

I actually fell for it when you said I love you
Now I realize all of them where untrue
You made me feel special and unique
Now I am feeling sadder each week
I liked it better when she was not around
Now I would rather drown

I actually thought you were my friends
You were once good to me but now
You have changed
My passing has been arranged

I use to like spending time with you
These days I find it hard to speak with you
The hugs we share use to make me smile
These days my life isn’t worthwhile
Without you I am worthless




Copyright © Franko_1991 ... [ 2006-06-16 10:00:31]
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Re: Worthless to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:52:36 PM AEST
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aww...that's so sad but very well written. i can relate to that situation. it really sux. nice work! i hope things get better for you!


Re: Worthless to you (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:25:10 PM AEST
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really sad and emotional but nice work of expression


Re: Worthless to you (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:02:44 AM AEST
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Good job in showing the emotions,
I can relate to this i also had "friends" that were making my life a living hell but as time I just let it go, dont let something like this bring you down. In the end it probably wasnt worth it.

Best wishes,
~*Eve*~


Re: Worthless to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Franko_1991 on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 07:17:36 AM AEST
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Hey Thanks for the comments
I forgot to add that this poem is for Tash F and Amy S




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