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Array ( [sid] => 121660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind and Between Her [time] => 2006-06-12 15:21:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cant promise you anything
but from my first impression
I think I love you more
than I knew what love was worth

I cant be absolutely certain
but from the way you spoke, and
how your legs were crossed, The way
your lips blushed
and your skin became soft
I get the feeling you
would not object to me asking
to be with me
in moments when people need
to be with someone else, where
things done alone are
not equal to things done with joy

Im not the type to be overly aggressive
Or morbidly obsessive, obvious with my emotions
Or flagrant with my tactics, or confident that-
Its in the basket, the kind to lay low, not overly persistent
Insistent on no pressure, no corner, backed by a respectful demeanor
I couldn’t have cleaner, thoughts of being behind and between her,

____________________
______________

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Behind and Between Her

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 03:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I cant promise you anything
but from my first impression
I think I love you more
than I knew what love was worth

I cant be absolutely certain
but from the way you spoke, and
how your legs were crossed, The way
your lips blushed
and your skin became soft
I get the feeling you
would not object to me asking
to be with me
in moments when people need
to be with someone else, where
things done alone are
not equal to things done with joy

Im not the type to be overly aggressive
Or morbidly obsessive, obvious with my emotions
Or flagrant with my tactics, or confident that-
Its in the basket, the kind to lay low, not overly persistent
Insistent on no pressure, no corner, backed by a respectful demeanor
I couldn’t have cleaner, thoughts of being behind and between her,

____________________
______________

Copyright Â© Jyssvw22 ... [ 2006-06-12 15:21:08]
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Re: Behind and Between Her (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 03:44:05 PM AEST
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I like your style. Great poem.
~Ursula

Re: Behind and Between Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:50:07 PM AEST
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your style is unmatched jyss..whether or not "they" say so..
but moreover - your nonconformative idealism.. striking - every time.
(even if on the softer side)

B

Re: Behind and Between Her (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:11:37 PM AEST
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Seeks out what is not alwayas given from others. This is a write, that leaves the reader feeling and thinking.
Very well penned,

Brew~

Re: Behind and Between Her (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:30:07 PM AEST
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nicely done jyss,

wiz

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